Sunday, January 01, 2012

CCLXXI - A Day in January

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A River of Stones had a challenge
on Facebook to write something insightful
about the small things in your life every day in January.  
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Rather than doing a set of 31 posts
I compiled them all into a composite about one day in January.


A Day in January
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It’s dark but there is the sense that others
Are already awake; sounds from beyond the thick
Velvet drapes and cool cotton covers:
With utmost patience a magpie feeds its chick.

The gentle cooing of the doves on the roof;
The lorikeets crippling the unwary with scimitar nips;
The ravens’ mournful cawing, remotely aloof;
 Wattlebirds tout “Hot pies, hot pies, chips, chips, chips”

Cars pass up and down the street,
From the tyre’s sound, the road is dry.
A jogger pounds away his knees and feet.
Distantly, a tram clangs and trundles by.

The room hangs over me as if made of wool,
Or as if an overly embracing creeper.
I want to yield to day-break’s pull;
Beside me the rhythmic breathing of a sleeper.

Warm bodies move restlessly in nightshirts and
Crawl out of the covers, into the musty gloom:
With the parting of the curtains,
The greys dissolve and colours flood the room.

The movement excites the feathered kin
Who sense food will soon eventuate.
Kitchen scraps, neatly diced, in a well-used tin
Are delivered with deference to the sacrificial plate.

Plum jam, home-made with love and care
Awaits to have after the feeding of the fowls.
Served on toast where all the seeds are there;
It’s good, I’m told, for the movement of my bowels.

Hot, black and syrupy, perhaps excessively so:
Espresso in a china cup of purest of white.
However else the day may come or go,
There’s some consolation that it started right.

Who is that in the mirror?  Watching me   
Prepare to lather a stranger’s face?
Grey hair, wrinkles and sagging skin sting me
With the truth about time’s relentless forward pace.

Against a wealth of previous experience
I check the to see what is happening in the news.
The basic stories have a strange intransience,
Just the names are changed, and the locations too.

A mug of coffee, the second one for the day,
Goes with me as I go to see how the garden sits.
New weeds, new flowers,  new growth and decay;
Insects and possums vie for the most tender bits.

Warm, succulent, juicy and red
Satsumas that survived the possum horde
Are a plum prize of the fruitful garden bed,
Some are eaten fresh, the rest are stored.

In the garden, plants get gently squeezed:
Geraniums, basil, mints and verbenas;
The heady aromas so rudely released
Transport your mind to distant arenas.

As if in giant cobwebs, the grapes are draped
In netting, to deter the birds;
Last year not a single grape escaped
The rotten little pecking…um…herds.

My companion when prowling the garden
Is a pair of good, strong secateurs;
Prune hard and then beg a pardon
Works better than asking permission first.

Many years ago, when she was going into town,
My grandmother had a special city-only treat:
A pork and pineapple sandwich, white not brown,
From a small shop, just off Flinders Street.

In her memory, I made such a meal,
With some of the left over weekend roast,
It’s the closest I come to genealogical zeal,
And to my Granny, I raised a silent toast.

Forty expected today, quite unpleasantly hot;
That’s one oh four in the old Fahrenheit scale.
Air-conditioned, the cinemas seem just the spot
To escape from reality, in all it’s over heated detail.

Meryl, as always, was right on the mark
But pools of light flicker as cell phones intrude
And strangers beside me, crunched stuff in the dark;
Is two hours too long to go without food?

We exit from our dark and plush cocoon
Into a seething whirlpool of humanity.
I feel out of place in this mad cartoon
And leave at once, to protect my sanity.

The day has knocked the plants around:
The hydrangeas are hit quite hard,
The lettuce lies limply on the ground
And the raspberries, crisp and scarred.

Salvias are upright and enjoy the heat;
Cold drinks do a roaring trade;
The driveway cooks unwary feet
And open-beaked birds stand in the shade.

Zucchinis, known as courgettes to some,
Grow faster than you can collect them.
But it doesn’t take long for the welts to come
If I handle them without protection.

Cold and amber, the tall glass is dewed
With beads of condensed appreciation;
Beer that has been so carefully brewed
Is an elixir, deserving heartfelt adulation.

At the end of the day when the work is done
Few rewards will so wash your dusty cares away
As a cold beer; sometimes even more than one
If it has been an overly dusty care-filled day.

The evening is hot, the mercury yet to fall
Relief in rain, we are told, is on the way.
The Bureau is 60% confident in it’s call
But, disbelieving, I water the garden anyway.

Out for a walk, beneath twilight skies,
I greet passing strangers with a cheerful ‘Hi!’.
Some respond with a start, as if caught by surprise,
While others avert their gaze and hurry by.

Tending to the charred offerings on the grill
Of a four-burner, gas-fired barbecue;
Gives man, the hunter, a throw-back thrill
And, as before, leaves the salads for his wife to do.

Mosquitoes announce their presence with a whine,
That turns sane people into anxious self-hitters.
There are those who swear on Intelligent Design
But none give a reason for these sucking little critters.

A quartet treacles through the night,
Playing Mozart, with mathematical precision.
The music is a sublime delight,
An escape from reality’s mundane prison.

The gentle caresses in familiar places;
The discarding of clothes that encumber;
The culmination in a loving embrace,
A genital sneeze and then so to slumber.

The rain does come, in the middle of the night,
The air is of the earth, a sense of life on-going.
The patter on the roof is a visceral delight
And the storage tanks are overflowing.
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The house is now quiet, darkly, softly so;
A clock marks the measured steps of time.
The moon casts a timid, tentative glow;
And somewhere a possum eats my vines.
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© 2012 J Cosmo Newbery
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292 comments:

  1. Actually i really love the verse that is an ode to beer :)

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  2. The weather bureau hardly ever gets it right so it was a good idea to water the garden.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  3. Ah yes, I would water the garden too! Your guess is as good as those of the Bureau, I think!

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  4. Jan 23: also lovely :)

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  5. "disbelieving, I water the garden anyway."

    Ha! Exactly!

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  6. Yes, water your garden anyway because that weather bureau is not reliable.

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  7. I don't like beer, but your description could almost make me want to try a glass, if it was hot here. But at our temperatures, I'd rater go for a hot drink, like maybe an irish coffee :-) We can't really trust the weather forecasts either... we just know it's going to be some kind of cold.

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  8. Weather forecasters are the only people I know of, that can be wrong most of the time, and still keep their jobs!

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  9. I put washing on the line in the garden this morning - it didn't look like rain, despite the forecast. Guess who has a line full of sopping wet washing?

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  10. Allergic intervention?

    I can't wait to see how this stone saga climaxes!

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  11. Zucchinis/courgettes were the most successful crop in my vegetable garden, you have to pick them before they grow too big.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  12. Hope someone knows how to make zucchini bread!

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  13. I have picked zucchinis before and yes, best to wear gloves. There's that hairy stuff on the stalks and leaves that can give you a rash and irritation. Lovely to have homegrown vegetables though.

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  14. And calling a zuch a courgette doesn't change a thing. By the time it is bigger than finger size (about 60 seconds after first sighting) it is inedible and good only for the compost.

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  15. What a bunch of wusses in your area. If I say hi, they stop and tell me their life history. Truly. It has happened several times.

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  16. so you must live in the city ?

    :-P

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  17. It is very nice to walk under the stars on a Summer's eve, I find most people are friendly and will say hi in return.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  18. I always try and make eye contact and greet others and am still surprised how many people avert their gaze or wont look at you at all! Great small stone :)

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  19. January 25: Yes, so interesting the different reactions to people who say hi. I walk a woods trail sometimes though, generally always get a friendly 'hello.' Could be the setting.

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  20. Maybe they thought you were going to mug them!

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  21. The one thing I love about our winters over here is that we don't have to deal with the overabundance of zucchini for a few months :)

    My father always said, "Better to look to the sky than to the forecast."

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  23. I would like to UPS a bucket of rain to you today for your grapevines ~ we are flooding here in North Texas!

    So did any of those folks you met while walking smile back and say "Hi!" to you? If not, how rude?

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  24. On the 25th: People do that to me, too. We must come off like ax murderers or something.

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  25. Interesting observation - and very true.

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  26. Isn't it fun to greet strangers just to see their reaction? I would go out for a walk too, if it wasn't so stormy and freezing cold... I love your progress!

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  27. January 26: Happy Australia Day to you! I'd guess the celebrations would be the like of our July 4 Independence Day holiday. Enjoy.

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  28. Day 26: You made me chuckle with your spot-on observations! Blokes just love that 'throw-back thrill', don't they? :-)

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  29. Truthful and accurate. Love it.

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  30. It was a good day for a BBQ, the rain stopped here for a while.
    Hope you had an enjoyable Australia Day dear J Cosmo, mine was great.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  31. Charred huh? Isn't that another word for burned?!

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  32. Yes, us women, we know how to make a salad :-) But I'll have a steak too, thank you!

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  33. wow Cosmo - you're really going to finish this thing, aren't you ??!! Kudos to you for all the fine verses. I'm wondering is writing a verse daily stirring up your creative juices - do you feel more productive? I read in many places that one should make writing a daily habit ... a thought I muse on whilst NOT writing!

    xxx

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  34. Oh, the curse of hearing a mosquito in the bedroom after dark, knowing what he'll do, and not bothering to get up and catch him. Or is it her?

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  35. Disease ridden little beasties too. I can''t see a lot of reason for the existence of leeches either.

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  36. very cool how you are putting all these together...yeah i am not sure on those mosquitos you know...surely there is a purpose some where...

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  37. January 27: Regarding mosquitos, I guess other insects and birds (?)eat them, so they have some use; but God could have created something less pesky, I agree.

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  38. That's one thing I never miss in winter - those horrible whiny monsters! :)

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  39. Musquito's! I love the 27 Jan. part :)

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  40. There really is no good reason for mosquitoes, is there? Nasty buggers.

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  41. Yes, we still have those sucking little critters here, in January! I am so awe struck by your writing Cosmo, I love it all.

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  42. A quartet treacles through the night,

    In this vile hot weather, treacling through the night is unfortunately apt. Thanks.

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  43. As always, Mosquitoes, away!!

    And I do LOVE a chop grilled to perfection. But pork chop is my favorite. And I love a good salad.

    Your music quartet treacling through the night, hmmm.

    By the way, J. Cosmos, thanks for leaving your much appreciated comments on my blog!

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  44. Mosquitos are a pain they ruin a lovely soft Summer's eve in the garden.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  45. A treacle of Mozart wafting through the stillness of a Summer's night sounds delightful to me.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  46. Enjoyed this one - treacling is a lovely way to describe it.

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  47. January 28: Beautiful. I definitely can hear the music.

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  48. Mosquitoes and Motzart. I'll take the latter! Those mozzies in Oz are the size of June bugs!

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  49. Treacles - another new word for me :-) This sounds very enjoyable!

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  50. January 29: A very sweet and warm 'good night' poem!

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  51. Happy Sunday!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  52. I am thinking that a sneeze is being a briefly timed event and I am being of the mind that I would be preferring a coughing fit that is being much prolonged.

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  53. Sounds even more delightful than the Mozart experience :-)

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  54. Hooray for rain. Someone once told me 'You can keep things alive by watering them, but to get them to grow you need rain.' I think they were pretty close to the mark.

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  55. So your rainwater tanks are overflowing? We've had so much rain this summer and more is on its way. I hope your tanks stay full but that you avoid the floods.

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  56. Your words today are really beautiful, I love the sound and the fragrance of rain.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  57. Jan 29 - a genital sneeze? That's, like, really gross :)

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  58. January 30: What comes to mind is...."Rain, rain, go away!"

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  59. 'A genital sneeze'? You make me laugh.

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  60. "genital sneeze!" Ha! Love it!

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  61. When it comes to "a" genital sneeze, I always hope for allergies!

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  62. Intelligent design; mathematical precision; genital sneeze; these are the visceral delights of your past few stones, imho!

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  63. I don't mind rain as long as it's soft and warm. What I hate is the sideways, freezing wet stuff!

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  64. Love the unusual imagery you conger here. Love the way every day adds on to the whole, cool idea. :) Still turning over the idea of a genital sneeze...

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  65. "Genital squeeze" - loved that description, J Cosmo. You've certainly poemed an epic and beautiful tale of everyday life.

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  66. Thank you. I have enjoyed this journey with you.

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  67. You made it dear J Cosmo, a very nice ending to your path of stones, I enjoyed the journey.
    Some wonderful writing, well done!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  68. Congratulations! It's been wonderful, fun and amazing to follow along with you this month! Thank you for all your kind, funny and thoughtful comments on my little attempts at writing small stones! I've enjoyed the journey :-)

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  69. I feel honoured to have journeyed along this poetry road in your company, it's been wonderful and I'm looking forward to the next road trip already..

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  70. A genital sneeze????!!!!

    Well done you for such a sustained and entertaining effort, thanks for writing!

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  71. Bravo, Bravo, Bravo !!!!!

    Encore, Encore, Encore ...... ;)

    xxx

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  72. It's epic - a marathon effort indeed - don't know where you find the time to be so eloquent. Nice work Mr Newbery!

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  73. Hotly SpicedFebruary 01, 2012

    Yes, we've had possums who under the cover of darkness eat all our vines and herbs and fruits. Is there no stopping them??? Congrats on lasting the distance. That's a huge effort!

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  74. Lovely calm ending to the day. Well done for keeping this up so seamlessly.

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  75. Possums gotta eat too ;)
    I've enjoyed your stones J. Cosmo. It's been a fun journey. Don't think you are rid of me though...I'm following you now!
    Cheers

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  76. You did it!

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  77. what distance is it from here to there?
    where does it start? What shall I wear?

    I think a shirt'n'sweater and pants and clean underwear
    A good hat to keep you dry, protected from sun's glare.

    Yet the distance is not diminished, not even by a hair.
    I still wish you the best, and hope for your good fare.

    d=^))

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  78. Whew, you made it. Congratulations to you for doing a stone a day. I personally abandoned my ship somewhere early in the month. I enjoyed your work!

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  79. Now you have a wonderful collection... congratulations!

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  80. AND THE POSSUM WINS, YAY!!!!

    What a wonderful month that was; I loved it. DO IT AGAIN!!!

    Actually you should, dammit: it's the name of the site after all: Notes on a Serviette. Do notes every month and one page to collect the comments. Loved it!

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  81. You did it - and so perfectly! :)

    I love how the ending was tucking into the beginning.

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  82. Pussy PowerAugust 12, 2012

    In a way I am sorry I stumbled across this poem because having read your nasty cat poems I resolved not to visit here again.
    I had no idea you were this talented.
    There is such beauty, tenderness and sensitivity in this poem ( I loved you Nana's pork and pineapple sandwiches and your toast to her)that it is hard to reconcile you with the same person that hates cats.
    Unless you rethink cats I don't want you to visit me anymore.If this seems like feline bullying
    then so be it!

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  83. Hi Pussy Power, not sure which blog is yours - there is no link.

    I suspect that you are upset by a poem where I was praising curiosity. The common saying is that 'curiosity killed the cat'. I felt it discouraged curiosity and really there are more benefits from being curious that from not. The reference to 'killing cats' was figurative, not literal, as I do like cats. Sorry if it caused you offense. Read read the poem.

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  84. Shades of TS Eliot and Hugh McCrae. Definitely your best . You cannot top this one and what is even more disconcerting
    neither can I. A truly marvellous poem. I know I am late in lauding this masterpiece but I eventually get around to everything.

    Signed
    Bewitched
    Bothered that you are much better poet than I am
    Bewildered that this can possibly be so

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  85. Nanette of Noumea? Is that you?

    Thank you. A lovely way to finish the year, with a sweet comment on the start of it.

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    1. But, remember, it is not a competition. It is like and not like, not better and worse.

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  86. A wonderful painting of a weekend morning. A touch of sadness at the 'mundane prison'. It does rhythm well though?

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