tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post2178663835152719856..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: CDIX - The Blue StonesJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-43310701606858412712012-11-29T09:47:04.172+11:002012-11-29T09:47:04.172+11:00 I feel for this poor guy and his sadness. I like ... I feel for this poor guy and his sadness. I like how you have all his missing piling up on each other.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-38199214439640031672012-11-28T06:42:28.878+11:002012-11-28T06:42:28.878+11:00I love your wordle. You must become a regular play...I love your wordle. You must become a regular player. And thanks for visiting me.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937202381298099458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-43150120664222840892012-11-27T23:59:56.126+11:002012-11-27T23:59:56.126+11:00And when the pile of stones is gone?
My Whirling ...And when the pile of stones is gone?<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/11/25/seven-more-with-simon/" rel="nofollow"><b>My Whirling Wordle Words</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-9117808223707739422012-11-27T13:20:36.214+11:002012-11-27T13:20:36.214+11:00Wow! Poignant, visceral, tactile, erotic, loving,...Wow! Poignant, visceral, tactile, erotic, loving, visual, missing. Beautifully written.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-3621726860334021862012-11-27T09:41:35.475+11:002012-11-27T09:41:35.475+11:00A lovely yearning scene.A lovely yearning scene.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-35978692917951844502012-11-27T09:17:40.065+11:002012-11-27T09:17:40.065+11:00well done indeed. excellent seamless incorporation...well done indeed. excellent seamless incorporation of the wordsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-25486956445642833662012-11-27T07:18:54.465+11:002012-11-27T07:18:54.465+11:00Hmm. The praise 'never say never' comes to...Hmm. The praise 'never say never' comes to mind. This is delightful. I actually remember one of my first boyfriends trying to teach me how to skip stones. But alas I wasn't his first...nor his last. We both moved on. That was over forty years ago!<br /><br />I actually wrote two, but as you've gifted a story I shall give you the link to mine:<br />http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/11/sunday-whirl-84-story-verse-appearances.htmlJuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-2933363734746608792012-11-27T00:22:50.068+11:002012-11-27T00:22:50.068+11:00This is beautifully done :)
I could so well pictur...This is beautifully done :)<br />I could so well picture him !Pratibhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060001943746107173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-52650858540392013272012-11-26T14:12:40.700+11:002012-11-26T14:12:40.700+11:00I really like this one...very expressive...you don...I really like this one...very expressive...you done well, Cosmo! :)Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-80969326940550331242012-11-26T13:03:50.678+11:002012-11-26T13:03:50.678+11:00oh, a melancholy moment, caught in the skip of a s...oh, a melancholy moment, caught in the skip of a stone on water...I'd say you did great!Mama Pajamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10278474039105398842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-53121648926933673112012-11-26T12:32:33.460+11:002012-11-26T12:32:33.460+11:00Deft and deep. Nicely done.Deft and deep. Nicely done.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-32197700701997409492012-11-26T11:35:47.695+11:002012-11-26T11:35:47.695+11:00For a first timer, you did a fabulous job with the...For a first timer, you did a fabulous job with the words, Cosmos.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-44789912025469172412012-11-26T08:21:58.563+11:002012-11-26T08:21:58.563+11:00Oh I do like this one. A thoughtful meditation on ...Oh I do like this one. A thoughtful meditation on love.<br /><br />xxxred dirt girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12939283533222061484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-38817212435017457082012-11-26T07:05:26.229+11:002012-11-26T07:05:26.229+11:00Very clever, J Cosmo! So glad you gave doing a wo...Very clever, J Cosmo! So glad you gave doing a wordle a try. I enjoyed the scene you set and carried through!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-76064755716803639692012-11-26T04:51:06.063+11:002012-11-26T04:51:06.063+11:00I enjoyed this, and am glad you listened to Inger....I enjoyed this, and am glad you listened to Inger. I love the repetition of still, and the building of the piece on the page. Lovely write. Welcome.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/11/25/black-friday-smiles/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-77074515335887234362012-11-26T04:49:24.591+11:002012-11-26T04:49:24.591+11:00I really do enjoy your nonrhyming poetry, too... t...I really do enjoy your nonrhyming poetry, too... this is lovely.<br /><br /><a rel="nofollow">http://lkkolp.wordpress.com/2012/11/24/santa-has-tattoos-now/</a>Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-4647267350716905122012-11-26T03:54:12.505+11:002012-11-26T03:54:12.505+11:00Really glad you joined in. Will warn you, the word...Really glad you joined in. Will warn you, the wordles should come with an addiction warning attached to them. You did a wonderful job with these, creating a scene and emotions we can all identify with. Your repeat of the word "still" captures that need to hold it all in place less the least bit of memory should be lost. Bravo!<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/25/first-kiss/Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/25/first-kiss/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-58021373504044909492012-11-26T02:40:37.828+11:002012-11-26T02:40:37.828+11:00This is so beautiful ... it flowed like a scene fr...This is so beautiful ... it flowed like a scene from a movie ... awesome !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-72957470844803316372012-11-26T01:23:01.549+11:002012-11-26T01:23:01.549+11:00- and you did so beautifully well! I can see him s...- and you did so beautifully well! I can see him sitting there, in the sunshine, with his heap of stones, and time to fill...Inger-Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16312912766394408963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-68444046088589550552012-11-26T00:13:26.468+11:002012-11-26T00:13:26.468+11:00I like what you did, and I think it is true....som...I like what you did, and I think it is true....somewhere, sometime.....annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-60477061366729821082012-11-26T00:02:23.584+11:002012-11-26T00:02:23.584+11:00Oh well done J Cosmo, glad Inger-M persuaded you t...Oh well done J Cosmo, glad Inger-M persuaded you to have a go at the Sunday whirl. We would never even know we were reading a wordle. The words all blended in so well. <br />What a sad tale. I could see this poor guy and hear the plop of stone as he tossed it into the lake.<br />Lovely piece.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-70154460295936218082012-11-25T23:08:33.063+11:002012-11-25T23:08:33.063+11:00Very nicely done dear J Cosmo!
xoxoxo ♡
Very nicely done dear J Cosmo!<br />xoxoxo ♡ <br />diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06171808338793139579noreply@blogger.com