tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post2420703321012906122..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 809 - Sundry HaikusJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-12854024747799118512015-08-11T09:44:12.817+10:002015-08-11T09:44:12.817+10:00Dispose
words
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done..:)Dispose<br />words<br />well<br />done..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-67044913341034724252015-08-11T03:17:14.487+10:002015-08-11T03:17:14.487+10:00Delightful and true! We deny our truths and affirm...Delightful and true! We deny our truths and affirm our wrong choices. This is most surely the cream of haiku!Jenny Hernerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15884658886582080587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-80724106405164097552015-08-10T05:05:24.470+10:002015-08-10T05:05:24.470+10:00we choose... poorly, so often. funny, that 2nd one...we choose... poorly, so often. funny, that 2nd one, the 2nd line I somehow read as "very volcano". The dementia must be setting in... ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-34598497038531041552015-08-09T12:58:47.924+10:002015-08-09T12:58:47.924+10:00A use of the word 'dope' I am not familiar...A use of the word 'dope' I am not familiar with. :-/<br />J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-3474877078882126212015-08-09T12:02:03.188+10:002015-08-09T12:02:03.188+10:00All three are dope... the 2nd. I often wonder, tho...All three are dope... the 2nd. I often wonder, tho I believe in a God, that belief doesn't rule my life and way of living.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-50224093753768610412015-08-09T06:29:30.247+10:002015-08-09T06:29:30.247+10:00Ha ha ha! The first one is hilarious. :)Ha ha ha! The first one is hilarious. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-13209408758646633902015-08-09T01:35:21.068+10:002015-08-09T01:35:21.068+10:00I feel that there is more addiction to goods than ...I feel that there is more addiction to goods than to gods alas.. But maybe it's still the purpose of those divine beings.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-61756283541567228092015-08-09T00:29:38.041+10:002015-08-09T00:29:38.041+10:00Loved each of the haiku.. as all have their own ch...Loved each of the haiku.. as all have their own charm :)<br />Well penned.Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-11257826553220161432015-08-08T22:00:11.752+10:002015-08-08T22:00:11.752+10:00Each one made me stop and think - invariably i agr...Each one made me stop and think - invariably i agree with the message tucked in each little piece of coal Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-27941905213102108502015-08-08T21:15:22.513+10:002015-08-08T21:15:22.513+10:00The first one made me smile ~ Thanks for the haik...The first one made me smile ~ Thanks for the haiku ~<br /><br />GraceScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-78153984585978892582015-08-08T12:00:23.249+10:002015-08-08T12:00:23.249+10:00Nice.
The last one particularly.Nice.<br />The last one particularly.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-23727035767685354282015-08-08T10:02:24.874+10:002015-08-08T10:02:24.874+10:00well donewell doneSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.com