tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post307007078760650323..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 878 - The Unfolding DaughterJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-48239430007698675052016-07-19T21:31:56.065+10:002016-07-19T21:31:56.065+10:00Oh, so sad! I hope that making this story into suc...Oh, so sad! I hope that making this story into such excellent art helps to heal the hurt.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-76567545326796250382016-07-19T00:05:41.072+10:002016-07-19T00:05:41.072+10:00Since there is a vacancy you can adopt me.I can ma...Since there is a vacancy you can adopt me.I can make home made butter...don't do origami but can make missiles from folded paper serviettes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-82488110329476327362016-07-18T11:00:25.166+10:002016-07-18T11:00:25.166+10:00This is so wonderfully crafted on so many levels. ...This is so wonderfully crafted on so many levels. Love it!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-37237940391617989432016-07-18T10:53:31.191+10:002016-07-18T10:53:31.191+10:00A lovely piece!A lovely piece!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-9847653429436895022016-07-18T06:46:22.648+10:002016-07-18T06:46:22.648+10:00I'm sure we will look back and laugh too. One...I'm sure we will look back and laugh too. One day.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-15240716554969081932016-07-18T05:05:08.498+10:002016-07-18T05:05:08.498+10:00I agree with Sherry...there is another story behin...I agree with Sherry...there is another story behind these wonderfully written lines...wonderful metaphor!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-64005276506216998592016-07-18T03:17:45.768+10:002016-07-18T03:17:45.768+10:00very clever use of the reference to Pearl harbour ...very clever use of the reference to Pearl harbour for an unexpected attack.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-19396910696886891762016-07-18T01:03:14.252+10:002016-07-18T01:03:14.252+10:00Goodness! Turning two childhood games into imager...Goodness! Turning two childhood games into imagery of war and maturing, oh, how paradoxical our love, our hope!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-62701765820517730012016-07-17T23:35:27.884+10:002016-07-17T23:35:27.884+10:00There is a story with tears behind this poem. I lo...There is a story with tears behind this poem. I love the way origami is used as the metaphor throughout. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-31926840200168997352016-07-17T23:00:27.553+10:002016-07-17T23:00:27.553+10:00That last stanza is so telling. Sometimes there a...That last stanza is so telling. Sometimes there are unexpected endings!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-6500152119985483052016-07-17T22:01:56.659+10:002016-07-17T22:01:56.659+10:00I'm with Bjorn... Sometimes stories have a way...I'm with Bjorn... Sometimes stories have a way to surprise us. I think I was just left holding the paper and scissors, after the rock smashed my foot.<br /><br />Wonderful structure and form to tell the tale. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-17136696781949981562016-07-17T21:02:23.508+10:002016-07-17T21:02:23.508+10:00Sometimes stories don't unfolds as you expect....Sometimes stories don't unfolds as you expect... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-75838135645932555622016-07-17T20:46:31.847+10:002016-07-17T20:46:31.847+10:00I really had a good laugh at this one.I really had a good laugh at this one.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-86685722334608855282016-07-17T20:25:33.914+10:002016-07-17T20:25:33.914+10:00I like the way the story develops through the use ...I like the way the story develops through the use of haiku. It is terse but poignant.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-13874176735445340342016-07-17T19:25:51.880+10:002016-07-17T19:25:51.880+10:00one must be ready for surprise while unfolding.......one must be ready for surprise while unfolding....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-88438891960956940972016-07-17T19:19:59.373+10:002016-07-17T19:19:59.373+10:00I'll answer elsewhere, off-line.I'll answer elsewhere, off-line.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-59952787580796064182016-07-17T19:06:31.425+10:002016-07-17T19:06:31.425+10:00Paper can conceal and convey many weapon - i'...Paper can conceal and convey many weapon - i'm curious were Japanese children refugees in Australia? do excuse my ignorance - Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-69047278573238699832016-07-17T17:09:04.277+10:002016-07-17T17:09:04.277+10:00Japanese art in Japanese poetic form. Japanese art in Japanese poetic form. totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-26880529624976052462016-07-17T17:06:07.346+10:002016-07-17T17:06:07.346+10:00This is incredible! This is incredible! Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-62796700459528539432016-07-17T16:50:58.468+10:002016-07-17T16:50:58.468+10:00Unfolding daughter.. love the origami reference.Unfolding daughter.. love the origami reference.thotpurgehttp://thotpurge.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com