tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post6626060587910440285..comments2024-03-24T14:31:58.662+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 565 : The Sand DragonJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-40568080316241071532013-07-12T08:21:51.119+10:002013-07-12T08:21:51.119+10:00Well for sure, J.C, one thinking I wouldn't wa...Well for sure, J.C, one thinking I wouldn't want to be would be a sand castle. They are sooo fragile, it won't take much of a wave to disfigure them for live. My fears are more substantial I am afraid.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-64172555039523664252013-07-09T20:44:21.928+10:002013-07-09T20:44:21.928+10:00Why don't you stick to something you're go...Why don't you stick to something you're good at, like limericks?<br />Sanchohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17621938013832239491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-62839136997427036902013-07-09T19:22:38.380+10:002013-07-09T19:22:38.380+10:00Thanks Amy, I have only recently tried a few Haiku...Thanks Amy, I have only recently tried a few Haiku. Haiki? It's an interesting discipline. Can make you pull your hair out at times, tring to get the meaning within the syllable count.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-56662206305137047912013-07-09T12:36:19.916+10:002013-07-09T12:36:19.916+10:00Fears built on sand, yes, lacking foundation. All...Fears built on sand, yes, lacking foundation. All that is built on sand will either wash away or be tossed aside by the winds. I loved this haiku, and I'm not a big fan of that form. Yours worked in all the best ways, Cos. Peace, AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/07/07/ginger-and-the-need-for-dverse/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-90074886487515475262013-07-09T10:59:26.226+10:002013-07-09T10:59:26.226+10:00Very nice!Very nice!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-24699888284438872222013-07-09T08:22:33.759+10:002013-07-09T08:22:33.759+10:00Very nicely written!Very nicely written!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-74634781630298755862013-07-09T05:49:28.059+10:002013-07-09T05:49:28.059+10:00cool take.cool take.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-29335624020564645122013-07-09T05:44:43.533+10:002013-07-09T05:44:43.533+10:00wise take, JCN ~ Mwise take, JCN ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-88637798494755772112013-07-09T02:29:19.111+10:002013-07-09T02:29:19.111+10:00Beautiful haiku and I agree with WabiSabiBeautiful haiku and I agree with WabiSabiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-14142719481677979782013-07-09T01:55:33.141+10:002013-07-09T01:55:33.141+10:00I really enjoyed the deeper meaning in your words ...I really enjoyed the deeper meaning in your words and the hopefulness that many if not all of our fears will wash away with time! WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/07/06/sand-haiku-heights/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-64454529513872144052013-07-09T00:50:11.446+10:002013-07-09T00:50:11.446+10:00Nice take on sand!! That really is a formidable dr...Nice take on sand!! That really is a formidable dragon!! Scary!! Thank goodness for the tide that washes it away!!<br /><br />Seriously speaking J Cosmo it must be a laborious task making them and to think that the tide comes in twice a day to wash it all away!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-58872753644201207732013-07-08T23:45:14.022+10:002013-07-08T23:45:14.022+10:00Oh yeah...even a mighty dragon can't face natu...Oh yeah...even a mighty dragon can't face nature's fury. Great take, Cosmo!!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-60003336065080265572013-07-08T23:01:13.631+10:002013-07-08T23:01:13.631+10:00Sand, without tides, would be scary desert-ed plac...Sand, without tides, would be scary desert-ed places with dragons.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-72622313111825604302013-07-08T21:33:56.669+10:002013-07-08T21:33:56.669+10:00Lovely take on the prompt :)Lovely take on the prompt :)Kalpanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02503951641129389045noreply@blogger.com