tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post679571390558521093..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: CCCLV - The WrenJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-78714094986878129582012-08-05T19:16:43.839+10:002012-08-05T19:16:43.839+10:00Late to the party (again) and can only add Wow!Late to the party (again) and can only add <b>Wow!</b>Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-83057757318638129582012-08-05T13:27:59.597+10:002012-08-05T13:27:59.597+10:00well done, Cosmo!
xxxwell done, Cosmo!<br /><br />xxxred dirt girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12939283533222061484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-64234429883255780052012-08-05T00:04:46.194+10:002012-08-05T00:04:46.194+10:00The wren can teach us all how to live....The wren can teach us all how to live....Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-91149809709349543672012-08-04T23:39:52.542+10:002012-08-04T23:39:52.542+10:00Beautiful poem and example of the form...I especia...Beautiful poem and example of the form...I especially like the ending...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-40272527254228789332012-08-04T21:29:17.831+10:002012-08-04T21:29:17.831+10:00Sorry Brian, not inclined to share. It's a te...Sorry Brian, not inclined to share. It's a territorial thing, you understand!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-89269208137940194672012-08-04T21:08:04.301+10:002012-08-04T21:08:04.301+10:00Sue J: Thank you.
Rob-Bear: Thank you. The wren ...Sue J: Thank you.<br /><br />Rob-Bear: Thank you. The wren I was thinking of is none of those but that is another story.<br /><br />Dave: Thank you, it is a tricky but satisfying form to use.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-58725833379414022922012-08-04T21:07:41.467+10:002012-08-04T21:07:41.467+10:00well you pretty much nailed this...beautiful flow....well you pretty much nailed this...beautiful flow...love how you capture her character as well...someone that i would def enjoy to meet...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-41623123486639345852012-08-04T21:02:07.167+10:002012-08-04T21:02:07.167+10:00I find this absolutely brilliant, but then I'm...I find this absolutely brilliant, but then I'm amazed that anyone can actually write these things, never mind write them well. This is a fine poem by any criteria. As rallantanda says: impressive.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-87575865587553248632012-08-04T20:20:22.733+10:002012-08-04T20:20:22.733+10:00Delightful little ditty.
But the Wren, she is des...Delightful little ditty.<br /><br />But the Wren, she is destructive. And unfriendly.Rob-bearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00171692478879522588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-58852013295188359162012-08-04T18:53:11.348+10:002012-08-04T18:53:11.348+10:00I like how you've knitted the lines together.I like how you've knitted the lines together.Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-22226754011774647022012-08-04T17:37:55.247+10:002012-08-04T17:37:55.247+10:00I did have the 'but' on the first line as ...I did have the 'but' on the first line as well, as required by the Pantoum structure but it really didn't sit well. Nothing's perfect.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-8222597081847013232012-08-04T17:21:58.527+10:002012-08-04T17:21:58.527+10:00Your pantoum potential is impressive. Also,your sw...Your pantoum potential is impressive. Also,your sweet wistful little wren poem is delightful.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-88679855569608939292012-08-04T17:04:48.447+10:002012-08-04T17:04:48.447+10:00nice...this flows beautifully and captures the ser...nice...this flows beautifully and captures the serenity of a moment...lucky wren...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com