tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post8196752200867585108..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 843 - The MachineJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-56803638641470087112016-01-17T06:49:32.914+11:002016-01-17T06:49:32.914+11:00amazing one.amazing one.Stephan Peter Carl Victor Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03089105614710560256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-13447851475594855102016-01-12T07:29:44.639+11:002016-01-12T07:29:44.639+11:00I can see the puppeteer walking/playing with all t...I can see the puppeteer walking/playing with all these characters...fun play!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-35025918790499924912016-01-12T02:04:48.020+11:002016-01-12T02:04:48.020+11:00this was innovative and profound. I'm impress...this was innovative and profound. I'm impressed with your structure and the interchanging of speakers throughout. Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-89808788447171410192016-01-11T20:13:29.909+11:002016-01-11T20:13:29.909+11:00A little masterpiece! I love the wry humour of the...A little masterpiece! I love the wry humour of the ending.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-35967499057532057572016-01-11T10:32:47.465+11:002016-01-11T10:32:47.465+11:00A new Everyman here in an expressionistic almost B...A new Everyman here in an expressionistic almost Brechtian sequence. Bravo.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-54067985955538668002016-01-11T09:01:28.685+11:002016-01-11T09:01:28.685+11:00This was very well crafted and clever with the use...This was very well crafted and clever with the use of different speakers all offering advise and the media certainly peddles fear...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-3221364360587577992016-01-11T06:31:13.335+11:002016-01-11T06:31:13.335+11:00Creative piece, like a Greek or Roman reenactment....Creative piece, like a Greek or Roman reenactment.<br />Bravo. A lot of work and thought went into this.<br />Randy<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-73287051798858914992016-01-11T06:00:23.889+11:002016-01-11T06:00:23.889+11:00A sad state of affairs, but extremely cleverly pre...A sad state of affairs, but extremely cleverly presented through the use of varied speakers. Brilliantly written!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-12298861592341999412016-01-11T03:06:04.158+11:002016-01-11T03:06:04.158+11:00This is very clever, ironic, and disturbingly accu...This is very clever, ironic, and disturbingly accurate. Some of us are beginning to recognize out lot - the politicians tremble, LOL. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-1577543362786621892016-01-11T02:46:25.237+11:002016-01-11T02:46:25.237+11:00This is like a chant.. the truth of man as prisone...This is like a chant.. the truth of man as prisoner... and there are always ways to lock us down.. very well penned.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-14685531707263941062016-01-11T02:19:29.021+11:002016-01-11T02:19:29.021+11:00Frighteningly true...
ElizabethFrighteningly true...<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-73957805154258841612016-01-11T02:18:00.440+11:002016-01-11T02:18:00.440+11:00This is very well done, J. They way you have retai...This is very well done, J. They way you have retained your stanza form while changing speakers is clever. i really like the end result.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-68968183654708019432016-01-11T01:47:35.503+11:002016-01-11T01:47:35.503+11:00A fabulous poem play that is sadly true if we let ...A fabulous poem play that is sadly true if we let it be....I agree with Sanaa...brilliant!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-73404826049953893102016-01-11T01:05:25.376+11:002016-01-11T01:05:25.376+11:00Very wise words!Very wise words!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-86967300130170667042016-01-10T23:15:09.091+11:002016-01-10T23:15:09.091+11:00Brilliant!Brilliant!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-54872257483849592252016-01-10T22:27:51.106+11:002016-01-10T22:27:51.106+11:00I was reading with a serious face until i came to ...I was reading with a serious face until i came to the last scene<br /><br />"[Businessmen]<br />We can recommend a good lender!"<br /><br />LOL <br /><br />thanks for enlivening my morning<br /><br />much love...<br />.Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-27422289879532944442016-01-10T21:14:58.449+11:002016-01-10T21:14:58.449+11:00Cogs in a machine...like it or not i suppose most ...Cogs in a machine...like it or not i suppose most of us are..when exposed it all seems quite pointless but i wonder what would happen if we didn't work towards the superficial - would everyone reach nirvana or would it be social anarchy...might be good to try..create a new universe! A very effective technique expertly executed..Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-14885430910453190422016-01-10T15:15:08.764+11:002016-01-10T15:15:08.764+11:00How I wish your Narrator was wrong.How I wish your Narrator was wrong.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.com