tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post8653702467850207161..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 765 - The PsychicJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-39227848925546572032014-10-23T20:53:14.090+11:002014-10-23T20:53:14.090+11:00The bearer not the instigator gets the brunt of it...The bearer not the instigator gets the brunt of it! A pity one who is knowledgeable gets the far end of the stick as the truth hurts! Wonderful write Cosmo!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-15580353318648214592014-10-22T14:17:40.892+11:002014-10-22T14:17:40.892+11:00Truth, people don't like to hear it and often ...Truth, people don't like to hear it and often want to punish the bearer of it. Great writeSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-21734984203562280372014-10-22T12:54:44.124+11:002014-10-22T12:54:44.124+11:00… No way was this going to be a happy ending. Wel...… No way was this going to be a happy ending. Well done.<br />Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-2667984436134058912014-10-21T20:46:43.353+11:002014-10-21T20:46:43.353+11:00I like the way you worked this. I like the way you worked this. Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-82555142977750135892014-10-21T17:29:43.109+11:002014-10-21T17:29:43.109+11:00Oh yes they can!Oh yes they can!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-74441399284431225962014-10-21T13:52:42.296+11:002014-10-21T13:52:42.296+11:00Opps, maybe she should have lie, especial to the k...Opps, maybe she should have lie, especial to the kid. That she could give him some hope.Cathyhttp://thequietone.net/2014/10/19/crazy-diamond/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-15371223766032480762014-10-21T10:51:02.695+11:002014-10-21T10:51:02.695+11:00Love that ending! The truth shall set you free? Re...Love that ending! The truth shall set you free? Really?Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-49434017457271662562014-10-21T09:26:28.761+11:002014-10-21T09:26:28.761+11:00That's a vivid, engaging poem. I like the rhym...That's a vivid, engaging poem. I like the rhyming bits mixed in with the dialogue.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-17196441583524298202014-10-21T06:26:44.165+11:002014-10-21T06:26:44.165+11:00Sometimes the truth does not set us free the way w...Sometimes the truth does not set us free the way we expect. Great writing JCosmo! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-11169892819802737472014-10-21T05:59:41.414+11:002014-10-21T05:59:41.414+11:00Love the expression "prisoner
To the will of...Love the expression "prisoner <br />To the will of the status quo." ~ Ah, this poem so fatally negative...Then otherwise by your words, to live in illusion world just the right choice....humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-48984206870627374212014-10-21T01:52:52.023+11:002014-10-21T01:52:52.023+11:00I like this.I like this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-7969144712835359392014-10-21T01:27:07.432+11:002014-10-21T01:27:07.432+11:00Shoot the messenger.. it has always been that way....Shoot the messenger.. it has always been that way.. very good narration...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-61285241661933116232014-10-20T23:21:28.766+11:002014-10-20T23:21:28.766+11:00quite interesting perspective on the truth. it doe...quite interesting perspective on the truth. it does cast that shadow that hovers over us whilst we have those that throw a veil of further darkness upon this shadow. <br /><br />gracias for sharing your creative voice Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-77730236036986706812014-10-20T21:58:47.248+11:002014-10-20T21:58:47.248+11:00Whshoo. I love this cautionary tale/fable! Givin...Whshoo. I love this cautionary tale/fable! Giving it a nursery rhyme makes the surprise end most effective. Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-25427256685602795722014-10-20T18:26:11.452+11:002014-10-20T18:26:11.452+11:00sad ending of the seersad ending of the seerVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-46679344372902709492014-10-20T14:53:24.969+11:002014-10-20T14:53:24.969+11:00No one likes to hear the truth, unless it squares ...No one likes to hear the truth, unless it squares with their fantasies. Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-49882664079127863812014-10-20T12:43:43.635+11:002014-10-20T12:43:43.635+11:00Well done, JCosmo. I was not expecting that ending...Well done, JCosmo. I was not expecting that ending.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-49360685822719640222014-10-20T09:15:42.655+11:002014-10-20T09:15:42.655+11:00Sad commentary on current times underscores this w...Sad commentary on current times underscores this work, JCosmo. Thank you for adding your voice, casting light with your words.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2014/10/19/magpie/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-9143519239063977702014-10-20T07:20:03.780+11:002014-10-20T07:20:03.780+11:00Unfortunately for that wise seer, no one likes a k...Unfortunately for that wise seer, no one likes a know-it-all :-) Really enjoyed this tale.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-70626504470187916342014-10-20T04:24:59.685+11:002014-10-20T04:24:59.685+11:00The seer's fate is one that has been repeated ...The seer's fate is one that has been repeated throughout history. Excellent write.keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-14479604504820694612014-10-20T02:54:11.887+11:002014-10-20T02:54:11.887+11:00Ah, the unhappy fate of the seer!Ah, the unhappy fate of the seer!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-78693305304857452832014-10-19T22:57:46.034+11:002014-10-19T22:57:46.034+11:00I followed you along in this fantastical tale - wi...I followed you along in this fantastical tale - with serious currently geo-political implications until the very end where you brought me to a smile. Wonderful work Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-19537618342726705812014-10-19T21:49:29.722+11:002014-10-19T21:49:29.722+11:00Ah yes...oh wise poet...the truth is far too hard ...Ah yes...oh wise poet...the truth is far too hard to hear...thankfully in blogland no angry villagers can beat you to death (hopefully)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com