tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post8684988628787309519..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 599 : A Stranger in their LandJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-14408639374199785542013-08-23T12:31:02.040+10:002013-08-23T12:31:02.040+10:00Enchanting and lyrical, stranger in a strange land...Enchanting and lyrical, stranger in a strange land. I love the rhyme, perfectly done.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-85135568726804163862013-08-23T01:06:22.214+10:002013-08-23T01:06:22.214+10:00I love the rhythm and rhyme of this! It has a clas...I love the rhythm and rhyme of this! It has a classical feel to it and is quietly thoughtful.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-12500965746691850322013-08-22T11:08:08.818+10:002013-08-22T11:08:08.818+10:00I enjoy your introspective personal poems.Travelli...I enjoy your introspective personal poems.Travelling under the radar slipping through the cracks is the best way to get through life with the least hassle. Someone discerning will always recognise the rare dark orchid languishing amongst the leaf litter.<br /><br />rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-37136798065423138752013-08-22T08:48:20.078+10:002013-08-22T08:48:20.078+10:00Another wonderful poem, Cosmo. :)Another wonderful poem, Cosmo. :)Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-67774020359601731582013-08-21T23:06:39.522+10:002013-08-21T23:06:39.522+10:00Delightfully lyrical. Not to be dismissed out of h...Delightfully lyrical. Not to be dismissed out of hand.<br /><br />Blessings and Bear hugs!<br />desert.epiphanies@sasktel.net<br /><a href="http://bears-noting.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Bears Noting</a><br /><a href="http://in-the-urban-forest.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Life in the Urban Forest</a> <i>(poetry)</i>Rob-bearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00171692478879522588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-52653074879557630682013-08-21T20:09:14.062+10:002013-08-21T20:09:14.062+10:00"...others stay in a foetal ball and refuse t..."...others stay in a foetal ball and refuse to go as planned." were my favourite lines. Although I must admit, it was hard to pick. <br />Amazing poem.Kalpanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02503951641129389045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-64739259119781275202013-08-21T07:41:45.553+10:002013-08-21T07:41:45.553+10:00Beautiful - and how I would love to visit that gre...Beautiful - and how I would love to visit that green and leafy land.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-47400413387688158322013-08-21T03:01:04.055+10:002013-08-21T03:01:04.055+10:00Not being noticed at all is a way of seeing what o...Not being noticed at all is a way of seeing what others miss. This brought right into the depths of the forest.Mademoiselle Modellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15451207941086886046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-75153364976940295472013-08-21T02:24:07.611+10:002013-08-21T02:24:07.611+10:00Yes, I feel the forest and the anonymousness of th...Yes, I feel the forest and the anonymousness of the person. It is quite special to be almost unnoticed in a foreign place. And it all rhymes as well! :)veronicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09014627398376882098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-62451132002390301762013-08-20T22:19:59.036+10:002013-08-20T22:19:59.036+10:00I am thinking that this is being a mostly sombrely...I am thinking that this is being a mostly sombrely put piece of writing and I am also thinking that you should be getting out more frequently into the fresh air.Princess Tikka Masalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214817947333360656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-36225902812798468582013-08-20T22:00:20.176+10:002013-08-20T22:00:20.176+10:00Being unnoticed is not the worst thing that can ha...Being unnoticed is not the worst thing that can happen to a stranger in a strange land. Just imagine all the things you are privileged to see when others don't see you! (I'm delighting in the rhymes and rhythms of this poem.)Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.com