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The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.
facade doubts curiosity bitter torn hit restless hope massive frail strip sting
Poets & Storytellers has the prompt "looking back".
You Never Know.
The Elder
I was young, I was raw,
I was full of idealism and hope.
The world was wondrous
And I was very curious.
The Youth
I am young, I am raw,
I am full of idealism and hope,
I am curious, but full of doubts too.
Confident, restless, reckless,
I put up a façade.
The Elder
Now, my journey nears its end.
I am frail and getting tired,
I am not bitter, but alone
I wonder—
What’s it all been about?
The Youth
What to do? Where to go?
I am torn between choices—
What is the right path to take?
Could I be making a massive mistake?
Will my choices hit their mark?
The Elder
There was no right or wrong.
Life’s decisions were made
And it unrolled accordingly.
That is the sting, I guess—
You never know.
The Youth
Is there a right or wrong?
If my choices are wise… or otherwise
Life will unroll accordingly.
That is the sting, I guess—
I will never know.
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I love the contrast between youth and elder. I enjoyed the reflections and the main take away "Life will unroll accordingly" Great poem
ReplyDeleteA moment of philosophising - and in wonderful style too - Jae
ReplyDeleteA lovely exploration of the two points of view – or after all, one.
ReplyDeleteThe contrasting of ages works well. I think most of us look back at the choices made and wonder. And although there might be regrets, life is unpredictable so even the paths we didn't take might have brought us to the same place. You are so right. We will never know.
ReplyDeleteI hope to go back and rate my place. Right now I won't admit I'm bad off, even at 92.
ReplyDeletefantastic! I really dig this piece!
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DeleteI like this conversation between older and younger self! There really are some choices we really can't know about one way or the other. As long as the things end up with a bit more good than bad, that the best we can hope for.
ReplyDeleteGreat conversation of elder and younger. Very well done!
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