tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post2496628167477879689..comments2024-03-24T14:31:58.662+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: CCCXVI - Filled with DoubtJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-57737561102070714192012-06-19T09:57:46.371+10:002012-06-19T09:57:46.371+10:00I responded to the change on my blog - but I think...I responded to the change on my blog - but I think it is the word 'also' that is breaking the metre rather than 'her'... Unfortunately, without 'also', the final line does not relate easily to the one preceding it. <br /><br />what to do?<br /><br />still hilarious either way :)<br /><br />xxxred dirt girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12939283533222061484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-87895935128096145762012-06-18T23:35:19.329+10:002012-06-18T23:35:19.329+10:00Loved itLoved itHansihttp://hansishallucinations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com