tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post3123478113454791452..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 753 - The Skewed World of Smoking Joe.J Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-71809060856169691562014-09-19T21:15:40.459+10:002014-09-19T21:15:40.459+10:00Such people are inevitable though!Such people are inevitable though!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-50329276985579826202014-09-18T20:34:03.329+10:002014-09-18T20:34:03.329+10:00Test comment from FredTest comment from FredFrednoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-72786306928058537682014-09-16T04:38:39.077+10:002014-09-16T04:38:39.077+10:00Sounds like a reverse RobinhoodSounds like a reverse RobinhoodKarishma Shettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10183133674860648743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-79782337487978405532014-09-15T17:41:16.433+10:002014-09-15T17:41:16.433+10:00What an unpleasant person! Great piece though.What an unpleasant person! Great piece though.keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-23520780130654622182014-09-15T11:59:18.408+10:002014-09-15T11:59:18.408+10:00Unfortunately, the world of smoking Joe seems eeri...Unfortunately, the world of smoking Joe seems eerily familiar these days. But, what an amazing response to the wordle prompt. Brilliant and thought-provoking.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-12806245377681006132014-09-15T11:33:16.787+10:002014-09-15T11:33:16.787+10:00Bravo!
Great rhyming scheme. especially the third ...Bravo!<br />Great rhyming scheme. especially the third line of each stanza.<br />You did great using an unexpected perspective of a hospital administrator/political slant...using these difficult words to create a smooth, crafty, and astute poem.<br /><br />Nice piece. A lot of work, I'm sure.<br />Congrats!!!!<br /><br />RandyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-83235313428405735192014-09-15T10:32:12.812+10:002014-09-15T10:32:12.812+10:00Ahh the soulessness of some people...
ElizabethAhh the soulessness of some people...<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-73860052205432102112014-09-15T08:58:18.121+10:002014-09-15T08:58:18.121+10:00Joe - the political corporate machine personified....Joe - the political corporate machine personified. Love this, but don't love Joe.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-82597342128853784922014-09-15T08:12:03.732+10:002014-09-15T08:12:03.732+10:00A very well written social poem.A very well written social poem.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-1452917099905997902014-09-15T08:01:59.128+10:002014-09-15T08:01:59.128+10:00The fewer Smoking Joes the better it seems.The fewer Smoking Joes the better it seems.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-47114849067332336892014-09-15T07:59:43.807+10:002014-09-15T07:59:43.807+10:00Sadly I know too many Smokin' Joes in our gove...Sadly I know too many Smokin' Joes in our government...callous and unfeeling...just greedy. I could feel the emotion and grit in every word...Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-70156072456205049912014-09-15T05:05:31.030+10:002014-09-15T05:05:31.030+10:00Ouch is right! Stinging verse!Ouch is right! Stinging verse!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-61170015480111408842014-09-15T03:18:17.672+10:002014-09-15T03:18:17.672+10:00A very telling portrait of a social menace.A very telling portrait of a social menace.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-91952350643165475372014-09-15T02:03:27.081+10:002014-09-15T02:03:27.081+10:00HaHa. This lovely slice and dice is the only reas...HaHa. This lovely slice and dice is the only reason to ever tolerate bad politicians. bravo.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-6361302127923760672014-09-15T02:02:55.772+10:002014-09-15T02:02:55.772+10:00Ouch! Well delivered...
ZQOuch! Well delivered...<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-3976109349581954572014-09-15T00:51:16.433+10:002014-09-15T00:51:16.433+10:00This skewed skewed world...ouch! ~ nicely done wit...This skewed skewed world...ouch! ~ nicely done with words mixture from 2 prompts.humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-80267787148817040132014-09-14T23:15:06.500+10:002014-09-14T23:15:06.500+10:00God save us from the Smoking Joes of the world!God save us from the Smoking Joes of the world!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-7210033446104557942014-09-14T22:53:54.666+10:002014-09-14T22:53:54.666+10:00It would be good if the likes of him could go up i...It would be good if the likes of him could go up in smoke.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-71176076088137688512014-09-14T22:49:24.905+10:002014-09-14T22:49:24.905+10:00It is interesting that when it was determined that...It is interesting that when it was determined that my Son would not get better, we were banished to the county, better not to have to look at death and dying, looks bad for the hospital. When those poor souls are gone, the hospital looks better.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-90755152979678696202014-09-14T21:16:53.893+10:002014-09-14T21:16:53.893+10:00Yes, I meant 'weak'. Careless editing. F...Yes, I meant 'weak'. Careless editing. Fixed now. <br />How would you introduce positivity in a case like this? <br />Long for the next election? Mull over the value of Joe as shark food?J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-73677712563001699772014-09-14T20:15:47.117+10:002014-09-14T20:15:47.117+10:00'The poor and week are his natural foe.'
W...'The poor and week are his natural foe.'<br />Week? Don't you mean 'weak'?<br />The poem struck me as a bit too consistently negative. But maybe that's just me.Nissa Annakindthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289000116822109714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-41368266603647410002014-09-14T19:34:29.340+10:002014-09-14T19:34:29.340+10:00seems you're describing political scenario of ...seems you're describing political scenario of my State here in India...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-37034076233175704922014-09-14T19:33:32.039+10:002014-09-14T19:33:32.039+10:00If he had a conscience Smoking Joe would be saying...If he had a conscience Smoking Joe would be saying ouch..but then the world would be a fairer place...and I think that dream may exceed the lifespan of our Sunday Whirling days...Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-65488067591966859342014-09-14T18:13:59.130+10:002014-09-14T18:13:59.130+10:00Joe says that we must be very tough
To rid our lif...Joe says that we must be very tough<br />To rid our life of its social fluff,<br />We are just little workers, making cash for the jerkers<br />Who never learnt how to say ‘enough<br /><br />Great take Cosmo! Like your style not just spectacular word craft but with great life's observations Must have taken lots of thoughts on this!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-42398564675387388022014-09-14T17:41:07.387+10:002014-09-14T17:41:07.387+10:00At least you avoided the obvious interpretation of...At least you avoided the obvious interpretation of the wordle words. Original and quirky as ever, Cosmo.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.com