tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post5100246101410255422..comments2024-03-24T14:31:58.662+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: CCCXC - Night Hangs HeavyJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-85833656497059310292012-10-12T10:41:40.624+11:002012-10-12T10:41:40.624+11:00Great minds, Rob-bear! :)Great minds, Rob-bear! :)Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-27430379676537640642012-10-11T17:52:48.910+11:002012-10-11T17:52:48.910+11:00Boneman! Woohoo!Boneman! Woohoo!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-34220376236481901012012-10-11T13:43:09.041+11:002012-10-11T13:43:09.041+11:00Someone once told me that if you ask that question...Someone once told me that if you ask that question of a sleeping person, they will say.<br />But then, from the chambers of their mind, it isn't always what is expected and that sometimes it is complete fiction.<br />Funny.<br />But then, that I finally dragged my butt out of the cave and started walking the Earth again is almost funnier, eh?<br /><br />Spoons were always the bestest.<br />And, different for every person, near as i can tell.bonemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10484125049735629611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-13909963766159790442012-10-11T12:37:38.576+11:002012-10-11T12:37:38.576+11:00"Beside me,rhythmic breathing...." and ..."Beside me,rhythmic breathing...." and the images. Your post touches my heart.<br /><br />Thanks for your insightful comment.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-11819701538534562012012-10-10T23:55:29.003+11:002012-10-10T23:55:29.003+11:00Sounds like heaven to me. Interesting that I read...Sounds like heaven to me. Interesting that I read it first as the inner monologue of a human spooning a human love, but it could be animals and--in nature--parent + child love or flower petals opening . . . Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-86269494070044288142012-10-10T17:22:50.086+11:002012-10-10T17:22:50.086+11:00Your wattle bird is more musical than ours. Just ...Your wattle bird is more musical than ours. Just the same I really like the images of person the first nestled beside person the second. Holding her close. Thank you.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-5956934849068572742012-10-10T14:57:17.476+11:002012-10-10T14:57:17.476+11:00How comforting to have such peace next to you when...How comforting to have such peace next to you when you can't sleep. I often read, but love to know my husband is sound asleep next to me. I also like the image of the world outside getting on with its day, but you are still secure and warm together :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-78199285900470608152012-10-10T13:48:49.627+11:002012-10-10T13:48:49.627+11:00Thank you. Your take is spot on.Thank you. Your take is spot on.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-23465109336284502752012-10-10T13:22:46.558+11:002012-10-10T13:22:46.558+11:00Interesting takes above as to me this is about som...Interesting takes above as to me this is about someone kept awake all night by his thoughts, while next to him his partner sleeps the sound sleep of the innocent (or exhausted). Whichever, it is a really nice piece.Fjaynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-14690049527529614452012-10-10T13:20:43.412+11:002012-10-10T13:20:43.412+11:00Sweet as in very goodSweet as in very goodScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-7083232748234408922012-10-10T10:14:16.441+11:002012-10-10T10:14:16.441+11:00It was a nice night, J.C. And now morning one awa...It was a nice night, J.C. And now morning one awakens. On the street? Wherever, it was a very nic write.<br />..Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-69424536385400759362012-10-10T07:08:55.147+11:002012-10-10T07:08:55.147+11:00Well, obviously the wattlebird is a reincarnation ...Well, obviously the wattlebird is a reincarnation of Dr Atkins. It's the 'wattle-I-eat-bird' now. Repent your pies! Too much carbohydrate!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-11594523716089324252012-10-10T06:44:56.422+11:002012-10-10T06:44:56.422+11:00I used to think the Wattle Birds chanted "Hot...I used to think the Wattle Birds chanted "Hot pies, hot pies, chips, chips, chips".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-24924024697271463112012-10-10T06:23:40.158+11:002012-10-10T06:23:40.158+11:00We are hidden treasures! Thank you.We are hidden treasures! Thank you.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-85267679271400995012012-10-10T06:21:54.419+11:002012-10-10T06:21:54.419+11:00Thanks Mary, It was actually composed while lying ...Thanks Mary, It was actually composed while lying as described.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-58010734667985721582012-10-10T06:20:54.466+11:002012-10-10T06:20:54.466+11:00Thanks Laurie, rhyming is my first (poetry) love b...Thanks Laurie, rhyming is my first (poetry) love but I venture into free-form occasionally. (Eight times by my side bar.).J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-84462192549057214442012-10-10T04:45:04.942+11:002012-10-10T04:45:04.942+11:00You captured the essence of 'spooning'. :)...You captured the essence of 'spooning'. :) Lovely...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-90193910298672639082012-10-10T03:50:55.144+11:002012-10-10T03:50:55.144+11:00I just love this poem. The sincerity is palpable a...I just love this poem. The sincerity is palpable as is the tenderness of the thoughts expressed. The men have really scored high in my books this week!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-63837180854057439052012-10-10T02:36:57.663+11:002012-10-10T02:36:57.663+11:00Won't she tell you in the morning?
Perhaps the...Won't she tell you in the morning?<br />Perhaps the truth....perhaps<br />Like the way you set the scene with sounds.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-80981958885520709922012-10-10T00:50:52.171+11:002012-10-10T00:50:52.171+11:00Just what I was going to say, Lee. Noting could be...Just what I was going to say, Lee. Noting could be more fitting.Rob-bearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00171692478879522588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-87529498163369016512012-10-10T00:01:13.306+11:002012-10-10T00:01:13.306+11:00She's dreaming of you, of course!!!She's dreaming of you, of course!!!Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-40795437764982480342012-10-09T22:23:53.370+11:002012-10-09T22:23:53.370+11:00I can picture this, J Cosmo. It all seems so very...I can picture this, J Cosmo. It all seems so very peaceful despite the noises that dawn brings.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-55592191431979637742012-10-09T22:23:21.915+11:002012-10-09T22:23:21.915+11:00Wow... this is beautifully written... and a pleasa...Wow... this is beautifully written... and a pleasant surprise as I'm used to your rhyming poetry.<br /><br />Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-25398117059787937202012-10-09T21:28:56.160+11:002012-10-09T21:28:56.160+11:00From night to dawn ... this was a great tale !!!From night to dawn ... this was a great tale !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-50343821880410945272012-10-09T21:00:57.418+11:002012-10-09T21:00:57.418+11:00To fall asleep nestled together. To greet the dawn...To fall asleep nestled together. To greet the dawn still together! How nice Cosmos!<br /><br />Hank kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.com