tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post6292680027318735954..comments2024-03-24T14:31:58.662+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 825 - Alien Battleground.J Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-85363294599302311172015-09-21T23:58:42.958+10:002015-09-21T23:58:42.958+10:00A cold is a perfect reason to stay in bed if you c...A cold is a perfect reason to stay in bed if you can.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-88640394264103315902015-09-21T11:53:39.375+10:002015-09-21T11:53:39.375+10:00The good guy will win of course. But it may take a...The good guy will win of course. But it may take a little time. Nice that you can write with such good humor though you don't feel well. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-23318420397190698152015-09-21T11:15:07.007+10:002015-09-21T11:15:07.007+10:00Sometimes we are brought to another dimension when...Sometimes we are brought to another dimension when we are sick. Hope you feel better soon totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-32718425110595654652015-09-21T05:06:37.986+10:002015-09-21T05:06:37.986+10:00Yup! ...i got the picture and you are right :-)
ZQ...Yup! ...i got the picture and you are right :-)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-64077307464140718012015-09-21T01:46:37.379+10:002015-09-21T01:46:37.379+10:00There obviously are lots of conflicts in contendin...There obviously are lots of conflicts in contending elements vying for the crumbs. The stronger ones get there first!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-91157296981122506052015-09-21T01:38:48.009+10:002015-09-21T01:38:48.009+10:00Oy! Are you under the weather? You have described ...Oy! Are you under the weather? You have described the invasion so clearly it makes me uncomfortable, LOL. A sign of skillful writing! Get well soon.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-31919460894397353212015-09-21T00:39:33.146+10:002015-09-21T00:39:33.146+10:00What a comparison of the two battlefields--with a ...What a comparison of the two battlefields--with a little "pathetic fallacy" thrown in for good measure: The birds' dawn food hunt need not be mindless because illness renders us so--and yet, truly, instinct would take over humans, too, were not the pharmacy involved. I like that the battle/paradox is not resolved by poem's end. Bravo! Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-85709274824299310062015-09-20T23:46:33.857+10:002015-09-20T23:46:33.857+10:00Never thought cold can be expressed in such beauti...Never thought cold can be expressed in such beautiful words :)ghosh.surabhi@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03979091555553033160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-37592349967389040762015-09-20T22:25:39.875+10:002015-09-20T22:25:39.875+10:00Oh, yuck, that awful feeling at the start of a col...Oh, yuck, that awful feeling at the start of a cold!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-63167065631180952072015-09-20T20:03:54.052+10:002015-09-20T20:03:54.052+10:00Let's hope you are up and about soon like a sp...Let's hope you are up and about soon like a spring chicken.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-2921145981109402452015-09-20T19:30:30.718+10:002015-09-20T19:30:30.718+10:00made me smile, so many stories we can write, what ...made me smile, so many stories we can write, what may seem like children stories, hide real meaning behind them.NataĊĦekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-2116957065267418932015-09-20T18:37:00.860+10:002015-09-20T18:37:00.860+10:00I'd say pharmacy - but then I'd say that w...I'd say pharmacy - but then I'd say that whatever the dawn dilemma ;)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-50665644681398209282015-09-20T18:25:19.448+10:002015-09-20T18:25:19.448+10:00Powerful write!!Powerful write!!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-46590933350032496842015-09-20T18:23:14.137+10:002015-09-20T18:23:14.137+10:00Wow..fantastic take on the prompt..effortless!Wow..fantastic take on the prompt..effortless!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-16379380128800989382015-09-20T17:57:53.141+10:002015-09-20T17:57:53.141+10:00get well soon! it's a war out there - aliens a...get well soon! it's a war out there - aliens always trying to get in and those worm tormentors ( I shall always think of this line now when I hear the dawn) Marvellous the way the poem went from outside to in, from the relatively harmless to the more serious.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-74574179461783043652015-09-20T17:16:31.690+10:002015-09-20T17:16:31.690+10:00ouch! who will win?...ouch! who will win?...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-50314719828428980692015-09-19T17:21:03.182+10:002015-09-19T17:21:03.182+10:00All too familiar. I hope that the slime can be di...All too familiar. I hope that the slime can be dispelled. Quickly.<br />And I think that bricks are more alert than doves. Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.com