tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post6351910108730536112..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: CDXCII - Decay (Version 2)J Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-62343010824991175012013-04-09T05:54:02.324+10:002013-04-09T05:54:02.324+10:00Doesn't every love relationship ultimately dec...Doesn't every love relationship ultimately decay into oblivion?Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-91463331834267793142013-04-09T05:09:27.275+10:002013-04-09T05:09:27.275+10:00Aww, so sad... but don't you know poems can be...Aww, so sad... but don't you know poems can be resurrected?Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-68793557398151972472013-04-08T15:39:31.912+10:002013-04-08T15:39:31.912+10:00Cos, what I like most about this appealing poem is...Cos, what I like most about this appealing poem is the comparison of lost memories to being covered with vines. As we age, that is what happens.<br /><br />Lovely, romantic, and altogether intriguing. AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-87153389487354875892013-04-08T09:23:40.640+10:002013-04-08T09:23:40.640+10:00I love this! the cadence is a delight and the noti...I love this! the cadence is a delight and the notion of only giving us parts is a terrific device. This is good writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-84221727928313260502013-04-08T02:41:47.363+10:002013-04-08T02:41:47.363+10:00WOW! Wonderful writing. And nothing more alarming ...WOW! Wonderful writing. And nothing more alarming to a poet than the thought of lost poems. Loved this!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-30470602443394923862013-04-08T02:18:44.237+10:002013-04-08T02:18:44.237+10:00Ooh! I like this very much, especially the idea of...Ooh! I like this very much, especially the idea of a lost portion to the poem. You could be onto something here. I like that the reader must guess what the subject of the sonnet might have been, if it had been written.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-78804608182631178362013-04-08T01:57:45.972+10:002013-04-08T01:57:45.972+10:00This is lovely...it has a beautiful rhythm that on...This is lovely...it has a beautiful rhythm that only adds to its impact. Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-6090318968629178322013-04-08T01:41:41.649+10:002013-04-08T01:41:41.649+10:00seems appropriate not to include it :-)seems appropriate not to include it :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-85272142304265961532013-04-08T00:15:41.600+10:002013-04-08T00:15:41.600+10:00I really like this. The idea of a lost sonnet is w...I really like this. The idea of a lost sonnet is wonderful. And the tie in between the first and last verse is perfect.PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-82657995117102894162013-04-07T22:55:04.018+10:002013-04-07T22:55:04.018+10:00The words so carefully written
Are lost to moss an...The words so carefully written<br />Are lost to moss and vines.<br /><br />a very sad thing indeedaka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-75448705541413567882013-04-07T21:03:34.780+10:002013-04-07T21:03:34.780+10:00Ah, the lost words...Ah, the lost words...Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-70314919130823951552013-04-07T20:25:10.615+10:002013-04-07T20:25:10.615+10:00I love the idea of a lost sonnet... :)I love the idea of a lost sonnet... :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-52247697007449982152013-04-07T19:08:53.409+10:002013-04-07T19:08:53.409+10:00I think the prologue stands alone: it works beauti...I think the prologue stands alone: it works beautifully for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-80767240520722499082013-04-07T17:35:50.647+10:002013-04-07T17:35:50.647+10:00Just lovely...flows off the tongue nicely.Just lovely...flows off the tongue nicely.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-23242932709338557782013-04-07T16:31:46.350+10:002013-04-07T16:31:46.350+10:00I like it! Paints an intruiging picture.I like it! Paints an intruiging picture.paperdollmomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14315900640385889481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-36302524075798934062013-04-07T13:51:00.946+10:002013-04-07T13:51:00.946+10:00Another of your beautiful love poems, this time an...Another of your beautiful love poems, this time an evocative remembrance of a love long past. The epilogue is good - rounds out the structure well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14088023144163691307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-71886058541370489922013-04-07T06:32:11.715+10:002013-04-07T06:32:11.715+10:00And
And despondently night descend...And <br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />And despondently night descends...<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-66205847514360546092013-04-07T02:49:14.589+11:002013-04-07T02:49:14.589+11:00it's a shame the seasons have taken away the w...it's a shame the seasons have taken away the words, but maybe that is best. this make a lovely piece in and of itself; I do like the addition of the epilogue.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.com