tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post656736298528772296..comments2024-03-29T07:13:00.641+11:00Comments on Notes on a Serviette: 531 : Nocturne III – IntermissionJ Cosmo Newberyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-65326060121932274072015-08-24T01:21:37.570+10:002015-08-24T01:21:37.570+10:00Enjoying your previous posts and your versatility ...Enjoying your previous posts and your versatility as a writer. I appreciate how your blog is organized. The styles pique my interest and your writing is so fluid! Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-79245218113257861522013-06-11T11:08:39.650+10:002013-06-11T11:08:39.650+10:00Don't like redundancy, but this is lovely and ...Don't like redundancy, but this is lovely and true.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-31851245943119441772013-06-11T00:05:13.946+10:002013-06-11T00:05:13.946+10:00lovely piece with nice thoughts...start a day unen...lovely piece with nice thoughts...start a day unencumbered. Lovely close!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-24245688449476736332013-06-10T13:37:58.861+10:002013-06-10T13:37:58.861+10:00Goodness! A family affair!Goodness! A family affair!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-16983436416502772262013-06-10T13:13:42.792+10:002013-06-10T13:13:42.792+10:00that should be portions!that should be portions!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-67923825172367898202013-06-10T13:13:17.235+10:002013-06-10T13:13:17.235+10:00Oh, she did it again! That's my sister above.....Oh, she did it again! That's my sister above...I just scrolled down here to make comment on the exact same potions!! Umm...well, I'll just say, "what she said!!"<br /><br />Excellent work!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-38358708513479406772013-06-10T12:22:44.590+10:002013-06-10T12:22:44.590+10:00"Our problems, too, traverse the night refres..."Our problems, too, traverse the night refreshed", I love that. That our problems are the same yet new, every day, not resolved only fresh.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376004784875852908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-79109336908806681532013-06-10T10:13:44.877+10:002013-06-10T10:13:44.877+10:00very nice work. Randyvery nice work. RandyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-80773835605333547222013-06-10T08:05:50.065+10:002013-06-10T08:05:50.065+10:00Marvelous write. ~ MMarvelous write. ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-52651002441358922862013-06-10T03:24:50.360+10:002013-06-10T03:24:50.360+10:00I love that word "vespers" — it always t...I love that word "vespers" — it always takes me back to summer camp and prayers sung at nightfall, on a hill, with the sky above and the lake below. So restful. And in those days problems didn't "reappear with the coming of the dawn"! Well said.<br />I love this poem.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-36965042809929089152013-06-10T02:10:40.481+10:002013-06-10T02:10:40.481+10:00I love the note of practical positivism in this pi...I love the note of practical positivism in this piece !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-76658023454917056532013-06-10T01:39:41.228+10:002013-06-10T01:39:41.228+10:00I agree. Delighted in your steps toward compariso...I agree. Delighted in your steps toward comparison! This message used the form well,with room to breathe.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-37689186818276420622013-06-10T00:12:15.310+10:002013-06-10T00:12:15.310+10:00well done! that last stanza, and particularly &quo...well done! that last stanza, and particularly "countless sheep are numbered," slowed me down and made me think. excellent!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-30857151152889917082013-06-09T22:07:28.240+10:002013-06-09T22:07:28.240+10:00That middle couplet is a little sobering :-)
You ...That middle couplet is a little sobering :-)<br /><br />You are an accomplished water colourist.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-61873042867300557942013-06-09T21:45:22.173+10:002013-06-09T21:45:22.173+10:00True, and so well stated.True, and so well stated.Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-92028737876086338832013-06-09T19:37:15.752+10:002013-06-09T19:37:15.752+10:00Oh, if only the issues truly could be laid to rest...Oh, if only the issues truly could be laid to rest. Usually they seem more like zombies and they come back the next day.Rose LeMorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433814433778897038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-68545758557157760692013-06-09T16:09:11.208+10:002013-06-09T16:09:11.208+10:00So true. Yet sometimes those loose ends are things...So true. Yet sometimes those loose ends are things only we can resolve...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-46639003607151536742013-06-09T14:13:26.613+10:002013-06-09T14:13:26.613+10:00filled with hope and refreshing thoughts:) the way...filled with hope and refreshing thoughts:) the way to start our day,,,,lovely poemVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-82635730436084212642013-06-09T13:47:43.990+10:002013-06-09T13:47:43.990+10:00Loose ends and countless sheep can be conquered......Loose ends and countless sheep can be conquered...slashing paddocks is the answer...physical exhaustion...lovely pic ..birds in chevron flight...am going to steal it.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-22925233719896757582013-06-09T13:45:20.316+10:002013-06-09T13:45:20.316+10:00Something to aspire to, and beautifully expressed....Something to aspire to, and beautifully expressed. Thank you.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-79419743598035666282013-06-09T11:37:27.798+10:002013-06-09T11:37:27.798+10:00You had me at vespers. Very nice!You had me at vespers. Very nice!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30233877.post-917467301090622962013-06-09T11:25:13.967+10:002013-06-09T11:25:13.967+10:00Best to start the day encumbered, after a good res...Best to start the day encumbered, after a good rest ~ You got the rhyming pattern correctly & linked rhyme words - rest, refreshed & addressed.<br /><br />Thanks for linking up with Real Toads ~<br /><br />Have a good weekend ~<br /><br />Grace Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com