Wednesday, February 26, 2025

1355 - Echoes of Past Glory

 

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The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

This weeks words are:
lock, fades, echo, out, voices, burn, show, friends, time, power, hear, second



Echoes of Past Glory

The windows are cracked, dusty.
"Here's looking at you, kid."
Cobwebs have long taken over.
"After all, tomorrow is another day."
The chains on the doors rusty—
"Elementary, my dear Watson”
The locks and hinges too.
"There's no place like home."

Inside is musty, dusty and old.
"I love the smell of napalm in the morning."
The red velvet curtain faded, tattered.
"All the world's a stage."
Posters from the shows 
Of the glory days, faded, curled.
"You can't handle the truth!"

Voices from past shows echo
Through the circle and stalls,
"Houston, we have a problem." 
Memories from a time long past.
"That’s not a knife… That’s a knife."
But there is no-one there to hear them.
"I see dead people."

Will the powers grant a second life?
"Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn."
Will friends come out in support?
"To be, or not to be, that is the question."
Does a candle still burn brightly
For this dead relic of the past?
"I'll be back."


Thursday, February 20, 2025

1354 - The Warriors

 

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The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

This weeks words are:
hollow clawing bruised broken spell spiralling fog halo bound trace dragon crimson

Poets & Storytellers invite us to use the word "torch".


The Warriors

Bruised but not broken,
Sword drawn, shield raised,
The warriors stand defiant.
The field of battle crimson with blood,
A spell in the battle permits reflection.

It is not for the warriors to pick the fight
They are bound by the hollow dreams
Of distant leaders. Drawn into the spiralling
Fog of ego fuelled aspirations, to conquer
Foreign lands, green and inviting.

Do they feel remorse, a trace of regret,
As they fight for a cause not their own?
These warriors deal in a clawing, ugly world,
They give full loyalty to the dragon,
No harps and haloes await them.


Thursday, February 13, 2025

1353 - Nobis solis culpa est

 


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The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

This weeks words are a pretty bleak lot: 

past, climate, water, trudge, sludge, sodden, despite, despot, rise, demise, few, inner


"Nobis solis culpa est."
(The fault is ours alone.)

They trudge,
Trudge through sodden fields,
Trudge through sludge filled ditches,
Searching for water, food, shelter.
Anything really.  They trudge because they must.

Children, crying, cling to their mothers.
The men carry the load, the inner one as well.
There is a permanent climate of fear,
There are predators, man and beast, in the shadows.

A rag-tag, rag covered, rag and bone army
Through bleak, grey ruins, they trudge on. 
The demise of their past dreams, past lands,
The wretched, stinking skeletons of a despot’s ego.

Few challenged his rise, most praised it,
Despite the obvious warning signs
They cheered his rise, ignored his words.
Where are they now? Vanished. Silent.
Do they regret? Do they too trudge?  
Probably.


The title is a riff off "Non Nobis, Domine" 
Where god is give credit for glorious victories.

Friday, February 07, 2025

1352 - Smoke and Mirrors

 


The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

This weeks words are: 

touch, hum, flash, faint, gather, staff, tricks, head, snap, bits, cast, shadows 


Smoke and Mirrors

Act I.

Good Evening 
Ladies and gentlemen,
Boys and girls!
I have great pleasure in introducing
The Amazing Lorenzo!

A flash of light, a puff of smoke,
And a very dapper gentleman
With red satin lined cape 
Silk top hat on his head,
Magic staff in his hand,
Steps from the hazy shadows 
And bows to the audience
Gathered in the room before him.
The children are mesmerised
By his every unbelieveable trick—
Things vanish with a snap of his fingers.
The hum of the saw and the scream
Of his beautiful assistant, who faints
Halfway through being sawn in half,
Only to reappear, apparenty untouched.
Cards are cast into his hat
Only to reappear as bits of colourful silk.
And then, with a puff of smoke
He is gone, as mysteriously as he arrived.
Just the faint smell of gunpowder lingers.

Announcer
That was the Amazing Lorenzo!
Give him a round of applause.

Act II

Good Evening 
Ladies and gentlemen,
Residents of Utopia!
I have great pleasure in introducing
Lawrence Greaseball!
The next Member for Utopia!

Flashing lights, a loud drum roll,
The slick car-salesman type,
With his smile on high beam
A logo on the cap on his head,
And assistants and staff at hand,
Steps from the stage shadows 
Arms wide to the crowd
Gathered in the room before him.
The faithful cheer and clap
The cynics are alert for his tricks
Deficits vanish with a snap of his fingers.
The quarter acre block is no longer a dream
If he is elected as their local member.
Taxes will be cast aside. For some.
Jobs will not be touched, well just a bit.
In the land of milk and honey,
Life will hum along for everyone.
Thank you.  I love you all.
Cast your votes for me and all will be fine.
Then he is gone, as mysteriously as he arrived.
Just the faint smell of aftershave lingers.

Announcer
That was Lawrence Greaseball!
Give him a round of applause.