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Thursday, September 25, 2025

1849 - The Queen in Exile

 




Image by ChatGPT

The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

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The Queen in Exile


There is the sense of a quest—

Not a crusade, a pilgrimage.

A need to go, a need to return.


Reality—

Waiting, waiting, waiting.

Waiting for cancelled trains

Sharing the platforms

With indifferent sparrows;

The piped announcements,

Garbled, babbling in another tongue;

The words of the tracks carry her on:

Rap-rap, rap-rap, rap-rap..

Friendly people are there,

Not snakes but stakes,

They offer support, advise.

Moving place to place, 

Room to room, steep stairs.

Another bed and basin,

Somewhere to brush hair

And wash hands.  To rest.

Receptionists bark, snap;

The seeking of food, of water,

ATM slots eat the cards.

The food is expensive

Tinned fish, the best option;

Though three egg meals comfort too.

But the queen is without her court—

The missing of company,

Of speech, of sharing the trip.

“May I call you?”

Yes!




Thursday, September 11, 2025

1846 - Preconceptions

 

Image by ChatGPT

The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

demolished legacy step eager age turn scam rich chest shaking smell lie

(Decided to skip ‘scam’.)



Preconceptions


To be honest

I never expected to meet a fairy.

Equally, I never expected

Her to come by tram.


I never expected

Life to turn so quickly—

For age to be no barrier,

For her steps toward me

To be the first in a magical journey,

A journey rich in blessings,

Sacred ritual and spiritual nuance,

Or for me to be so eager, so willing

To embark on this journey with her,

Creating our enduring legacy.

My fairy and me.


I never expected

To be holding hands in the dark.

To be finger-combing her hair

With her head on my lap.

For my voice to be shaking so

As my heart swelled in my chest.

To lie beside her and smell

Her aromas, her fragrance, her being.

To commit to abide in her love,

To worship and support her.

My fairy and me.


I never expected

That so many preconceptions

Would be demolished so quickly,

Shattered and strewn—

Like a foundry worker’s clay, 

Crumbling, breaking away

To reveal the statue

Standing complete before me.

My fairy and me.

I had no idea.


I do now.


◊◊◊



Writing on a plane, 

flying in the wrong direction,

at roughly the same time, 

the fairy wrote to the same set of words:


For Lee*


We demolished their visions of age.

You hand brushes my shoulder

As magnolia blooms its rich mauve,

Its leaves shaking in the rain.

I pause, take a breath.

You kiss my breast.

Your fingers lift me up, step by eager step.

Our skin glows like those

Rain washed flowers.

I lay my head on you chest.

We arrive with the tide.

Our waves receding with the moon

These cycles of love eternal

Our legacy.


◊◊◊


* Lee is my nom du rue.



Thursday, August 28, 2025

1396 - A Curious Man


 The image is the insides of a cello by Charles Brooks. Curious, no?


The Sunday Whirl presents these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

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Converted runway into "runs away".  Poetic licence.




A Curious Man


“Curiosity is the wick 

in the candle of learning.” 

— William Arthur Ward


It’s a mess, his mind.

It dances, 

The only part of him that does,

It lingers then runs away

On a whim, on an idea,

That, virus-like, takes him

Down exciting pathways,

A prey to his curiosity,

Where he draws aside veils

That few normal men

Dare to part.


His realm is also a mess.

Papers, notes, books,

A microscope, two actually,

A brass Tibetan singing bowl,

A decanter of port, brandy.

Paintings, plants, music.

A rubber puppet of Leonid Breznev.

Three lacrosse balls, 

Chinese medicine balls,

A computer and an abacus.

A kaleidoscope of stuff:

A harlequin testament

To a curious mind.


He’s not a rugged man,

Not a blokey man,

Not even a man’s man.

He laughs at the ridiculous.

Has no football team,

Hard pressed to even name one.

Writes poetry of various sorts,

Abhors cruelty and injustice.

Gets emotional easily,

His voice will quaver,

And his eyes water readily.

But he doesn’t care, 

It’s because he does.

As men go, he is, well...

Curious.



Thursday, August 21, 2025

1395 - Another Place

 


Image by ChatGPT

The Sunday Whirl presents these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

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Another Place


“Silence is sometimes the best answer.” 

— Dalai Lama XIV



The smoke spirals slowly upwards

The air is dense with aromatics,

Drifting slowly in the breeze,

On the draft that flows gently,

Languidly, through the building,

Swirling ever so lazily.



The outside boils.

A world of rules.

Must this.

Should that.

Buy. Buy. Buy.

Constant pressure.

Craft your life.

Chase your dreams.

Buy. Keep. Forget.

A shallow shell

Without meaning.

Or purpose.

Sham friends.

It has laughter,

But no joy.

It is all rush.

It slaps noisily

Against the temple

But cannot enter.



Inside the stillness

The smoke spirals calmly,

Sending a message of both

Impermanence and continuity—

A signal that life can be embraced

Peacefully, serenely, in another place.


A temple bell rings.