I'm cheating a little on this one. It is some years old now
but has not been published in this blog before and seems quite fitting for the end
of what the Chinese would call an "interesting year".
To a friend of many names.
You touched me once,
In passing;
You probably don't remember,
But I recall it well.
You touched me once,
In passing,
And as you continued on your way
Left a special imprint,
A mark upon the clay that you
And others like you
Have moulded into me.
I reacted to your presence,
To your coming and your going,
With suble little changes
That only I can see.
You shaped my thoughts and standards
Then continued moving on;
Probably never knowing
That I could see where you had been
Long after you had gone.
Yes, you touched me once.
In passing.
You probably don't remember
But I recall it well.
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© J Cosmo Newbery
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but has not been published in this blog before and seems quite fitting for the end
of what the Chinese would call an "interesting year".
To a friend of many names.
You touched me once,
In passing;
You probably don't remember,
But I recall it well.
You touched me once,
In passing,
And as you continued on your way
Left a special imprint,
A mark upon the clay that you
And others like you
Have moulded into me.
I reacted to your presence,
To your coming and your going,
With suble little changes
That only I can see.
You shaped my thoughts and standards
Then continued moving on;
Probably never knowing
That I could see where you had been
Long after you had gone.
Yes, you touched me once.
In passing.
You probably don't remember
But I recall it well.
---
© J Cosmo Newbery
---
Wow again you said everything so perfectly. I could apply this poem to so many people in my life. I wish I could send this to them all.
ReplyDeleteyou also touch people in passing and leave an imprint, cosmo.
ReplyDeletehere's to a good and interesting new year ..
Such a beautiful photograph, footprints in the sand and a truly lovely poem; very much like one I wrote to someone once, but its in my private collection. ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kindness, I wish you and your loved ones a Happy New Year for 2009. ♥♥
It's nice to believe that we all leave prints in the lives around us.
ReplyDeleteOne can but hope ...
My favorite so far... and so you know, it applies to you, too... xo
ReplyDeletethe students poem to the teacher.
ReplyDeleteNice, and you didn't bring the preacher.
Not that I mind each either creature.
Only that here, that's the usual feature....
at the beach with the footprints wandering off....
Foam & Diane: Action & reaction.
ReplyDeleteNice recognised and put, Boneman. It seemed a more appropriate home.
All: Thank you.
The sentiments expressed here are very close to my own heart.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. A true and lasting observation. You are our prince of prints.
ReplyDeleteLovely Cosmo ♥
ReplyDeleteA good 'un thanks.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
P
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteTell me what kind of footprint you’ll leave,
ReplyDeleteA footprint to wipe off the parquet and look askance,
Or an invisible footprint
In someone else’s soul for many, many years...