Friday, October 15, 2010

CCXI - A Lady addresses a tomato...


Sir Percy, as is his want, started a Tomato poem competition.
Here is an entry. There may be more...

A Lady addresses a tomato...

Lovely tomato, to you I accede,
Let nothing consummation impede.
A gentle nibble on your cheek,
I tremble to your smooth physique...
Oh dear, it seems you've spilled your seed!

© J Cosmo Newbery

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  1. You saucy thing, you!! Sounds like something Eve would have uttered. Was a tomato the forbidden fruit?

  2. How clever to use a tomato to depict making love....that is what you were doing, wasn't it? The forbidden fruit was the pair on the ground... Thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting on the comrades marathon poem. I will revisit the wording tomorrow. What you said makes a lot of sense. Ta.

  3. Lol, yes dear J Cosmo you are a saucy, sexy fellow, such a fruitful way to describe making love!
    xoxoxo ♡

  4. LOL - very clever!

  5. Thank you for the smile!! i needed one. xxx


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