Theme Thursday's theme last Thursday was "television".
The Watcher
I stayed at a hotel recently;
It had all the normal stuff
One needs to be quite comfortable,
No sense in living rough.
In the centre of the room,
On a cabinet of it’s own,
Was an enormous television,
With a remote beside the phone.
A brochure proudly told me
Of the shows of every kind
That I had the chance to choose between,
If feeling so inclined.
Four days later, as I packed my things,
Preparing to move on,
It stood there black and sulking
As I had never turned it on.
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© 2011 J Cosmo Newbery
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The Watcher
I stayed at a hotel recently;
It had all the normal stuff
One needs to be quite comfortable,
No sense in living rough.
In the centre of the room,
On a cabinet of it’s own,
Was an enormous television,
With a remote beside the phone.
A brochure proudly told me
Of the shows of every kind
That I had the chance to choose between,
If feeling so inclined.
Four days later, as I packed my things,
Preparing to move on,
It stood there black and sulking
As I had never turned it on.
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© 2011 J Cosmo Newbery
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Brilliant! Life's too short for too much TV!
ReplyDeleteThis was really good. The meter and rhyme were spot on...and a nice little message at the end. Bravo! Vb
ReplyDeleteWow! Four days in a motel room without ever turning on the TV... I am glad that I finally got around to visiting you from Theme Thursday.
ReplyDeleteOh Boy, that machine sounds useful and mosquitoes to boot! Very creative...
ReplyDeleteLovely... once again gives us a chance to pause and think about the time we waste watching tv day in and day out... well done for ignoring it...
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