Saturday, January 10, 2015

775 - A Savage Awakening

Three Word Wednesday requires participants
to use the three words of the week in a composition.
The words this week were: savage, electric, and passionate.


A Savage Awakening.

The object of his passionate favours
Was a household labour-saver.
But the electric supply
Brought a tear to his eye
And a scream that woke all the neighbours.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2015
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8 comments:

  1. I can't count how many times my mother would use this darn device early in the morning. I was one of those people who would scream. I like a place being clean like anyone else, but gosh darn it, let me sleep.

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  2. Ouch. No loss of suction isn't always a good thing.

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    1. Though that doesn't look like a Dyson.

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  3. My Mother used to always sing the same song as she used it. "Nursey, come over her and nold my hand"

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  4. Neighbours who hoover at 6am...do you think anyone would hear the shotgun over the vacuum (kidding of course) ;)

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  5. love the way you use the words and tell that event ...

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  6. One can really gets awaken...and compose the cantata for broom and dusty pan ...just for difference...smiles

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