Tuesday, September 13, 2016

904 - Overexposed




D’Verse had a prompt requiring a 44 word piece with the prompt word ‘open’.
This was a limerick before it went horribly wrong chasing the 44 word rabbit.


Over Exposed

A lady lay back in a bath,
With the bubbles covering her stuff
While posing for a discrete photograph,
“Well, I’m open to the thought
Of the more raunchy sort
But you’ll have to pay me enough,
Enough,
You’ll have to pay me enough.”
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2016
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16 comments:

  1. Ha..I can see that money can buy happiness despite all they say

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  2. Thanks for a chuckle. And the image you have paired it with is perfect.

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  3. ha...lots of enough for 44's sake :)

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  4. Nice chuckle of a quadrille! It does seem there is enough money to buy happiness or whatever.

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  5. Yes, I can feel the morphing of the limerick into a quadrille and what a fun take on the prompt. Perhaps you've invented a new form!

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  6. Hmmmmmm...stuff that!!

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  7. We can do with some laughs
    With such drama of a bath
    Lady with turfs
    Wanting to serve
    A challenge with a bluff

    Hank

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  8. A little cheeky, that was...hehe

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  9. SMiLes..
    bubbles
    tickle
    an open..
    funny
    bone..
    i sheD thE bubbLes..;)

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