Thursday, June 05, 2025

1380 - The Labyrinth


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The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
 

This week's words are:

Wordle 709

prowl, beast, claws, shift, mask, strands, twists, temple, wandered, underworld, map, thread




The Labyrinth


“The seeker is the sought.” 

— Rupert Spira


The path winds around

Not outward, spiralling in.

No need for Ariadne’s thread here

He’s not trying to get out.

Getting out is not the end,

Not the goal he’s searching for.


So, when his focus shifts

From the temple to the paths

That twist and turn, seemingly at whim.

It slowly dawns upon him—

The underworld is not below,

It is found to be within.

There is no map to guide him—

He is the map, it seems.

He had wandered, prowled

Around the edges of this maze

In the earlier days of his quest

But fearing the enclosed beast,

The Minotaur of fear and doubt,

That prowls the darkened corridors

That traverse across his mind.

The eyes of fear, the claws of doubt,

They pulled him from the edge.


Now, denying Ariadne,

The strands of silken threads

Lead him further in, not out,

And there, in the silence 

That was always there,

The mask finally falls away.

He is the temple.


 

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14 comments:

  1. A very different take I fear I am not and never will be the temple - though I am certainly the pain and the fear.

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    1. Another view: Imagine you’ve spent your whole life thinking you're a wave, afraid of crashing—then suddenly realize you’re actually the ocean.
      Nothing has changed, but now you’re free.

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  2. A change in perspective can mean everything. I'm glad your MC figured it out.

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  3. A mask that falls away is always a good thing.

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  4. I love this! You made me feel the experience of walking that labyrinth, finally coming to the centre, and the opening up of that realisation.

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  5. I love this, and it resonates me that view that we carry the worst within ourselves really

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  6. "The Minotaur of fear and doubt/That prowls the darkened corridors/That traverse across his mind." This is so powerful!

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  7. "The underworld is not below, It is found to be within." And if finds it there, what is to be concrete? Not the edge.

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  8. I love a contemplative labyrinth walk, My minotaur dwells within and sometimes the rhythm shifts it a little. Loved this deep poem.

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  9. AnonymousJune 11, 2025

    He is the map, it seems.
    He had wandered, prowled
    Around the edges of this maze
    In the earlier days of his quest
    But fearing the enclosed beast,
    The Minotaur of fear and doubt.....well........what a resonation with me
    ...seriously good stuff.....stunning to be honest, opens my mind — Ain

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  10. The underworld is not below,
    It is found to be within.
    There is no map to guide him
    He is the map, it seems. Love this It is all found within and love the last two lines as well

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  11. I love the Greek mythology allusions, and your poem is wonderful and laden with meaning. We all have to navigate our internal labyrinths and either choose to destroy the Minotaur within, or to learn to live with him - with or without an Ariadne.

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  12. Powerful poem, J. We are whatever we think we are.

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  13. AnonymousJune 15, 2025

    Very Zen.

    PK

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