Thursday, November 20, 2025

1856 - The Watcher

 

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The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
greed tragedy despair presence walk calm strings earth all spirit vibrating heart 

Poets and Storytellers gave the following prompt: 
We will invite you to find inspiration in this quote: 
“The most expensive garment you’ll ever own is your own flesh.”


The Watcher

I am watching you—
Watching you as you walk
Upon the soil, upon the land,
Upon my earth, whose spirit
Once gave birth to you.

Your presence is my gift
Of life to the Universe.
You arose from my waters,
But never grasped your inheritance.
Now my heart despairs 
For what your future holds.

Your future, my children,
Hangs by a thread, precariously.
A thread thinned by the tragedies
Of war and greed, frayed 
By senseless intolerance,
Vibrating discordantly
Due to the disharmony
That mars the calm lands
That you were given.

I do not threaten you.
I can pull no strings,
Create no changes.
I am just watching you.
Waiting.


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2 comments:

  1. A poignant reminder of our responsibilities to the planet and each other 🙌

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  2. Deborah PedersenNovember 20, 2025

    I can pull no strings. Vibrating discordantly. Such good lines. Thank you for your work toward the beauty of this world.

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