1860 - Stripping Away Innocence

 

 Image: ChatGPT but with a little human intervention

The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

hook sway hearts strip chain dizzy sweep you stick swell steam shock

Stripping Away Innocence

They are friends, right?

You go out with your friends, right?

Well, not my best decision.

I was expecting a stage show

(The place was called “The Hook”)

And, certainly, it did have a stage—

But free entry struck me as unusual.

Chains and poles were curious, too,

But modern staging can be a bit edgy.

The music began to swell,

The audience, all male I noticed,

Was clapping and swaying to the music.

You, and I mean me here, were swept along

Heavy thumping base—a clapped heart-beat.

Hypnotic, rhythmic, expectant…

I was a bit shocked when a lady appeared

And wrapped herself around a pole,

Moving like an oiled anaconda.  

You could tell she was a lady

As, anatomically, little was covered

By anything other than the pole.

But “Lady” implies a class I’m not sure applies.

Let’s say female —even that, I’m told, is fluid.

Eventually I left that testosterone filled steam room

Eventually.  

I was there with my friends, right?

Friends stick it out to the end, right?

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