Australian Mensa has a poetry competition going at the moment.
The topic is 'Brilliance'. I probably wont submit this poem.
A sonnet to a brilliant mind.
There was no doubt that he was smart,
He clearly knew a thing or two.
He recited Latin off by heart
And knew the physics of the letter mu.
But our hero had a fatal trait,
Too common in those quite bright:
In finding fault and setting it straight,
Brilliance throws an unkind light.
He loved to take the pedant’s role
And publicly skewer the defenceless:
It got too much for one poor soul
Who turned and beat him senseless.
So now, beneath the daisies, in the danky peat
He instructs the little earthworms on the proper way to eat.
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© 2011 J Cosmo Newbery
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The topic is 'Brilliance'. I probably wont submit this poem.
A sonnet to a brilliant mind.
There was no doubt that he was smart,
He clearly knew a thing or two.
He recited Latin off by heart
And knew the physics of the letter mu.
But our hero had a fatal trait,
Too common in those quite bright:
In finding fault and setting it straight,
Brilliance throws an unkind light.
He loved to take the pedant’s role
And publicly skewer the defenceless:
It got too much for one poor soul
Who turned and beat him senseless.
So now, beneath the daisies, in the danky peat
He instructs the little earthworms on the proper way to eat.
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© 2011 J Cosmo Newbery
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well, at least he is now good at fertilizing the daisies ..
ReplyDeleteand why not submit it?
Fair question, Foam.
ReplyDeleteDelightful amusing!
ReplyDeleteLOL - hilarious look at the extreme side of brilliance!
ReplyDeleteI think it is 'brilliant' dear J Cosmo, I think you should submit it.
ReplyDeleteLovely image also!
xoxoxo ♡
Excellent! Of course you should submit it.
ReplyDeleteSounds like they buried him too deep and he popped up over here. {*grin*}
ReplyDeleteI say submit.
Heehee, clever one! Yes, submit!
ReplyDeleteI've told you before: please don't write poems about me!
ReplyDeleteYeah. Right.
ReplyDeleteJust three words.
ReplyDeleteFac ut vivas.
Mensa that!
Dearie me. The downside with the incurably bright is often an absence of humour. :)
ReplyDeleteGoodness...some people are just so terribly rude!LOL
ReplyDeleteOnly if they intend to be!
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