Theme Thursday had a topic of "Space".
Sunday Scribblings had a topic of "Big".
This post is a collision of the two.
It started life as a rondeau but morphed due to rhyming issues.
Sunday Scribblings had a topic of "Big".
This post is a collision of the two.
It started life as a rondeau but morphed due to rhyming issues.
It is quite large.
There is no doubt, it is quite large
And no-one seems to be in charge
Of this condensed cosmic place,
Hurtling through the depths of space.
They cannot even tell it’s shape,
Donut, disc or endless tape,
And that’s not for want of trying
But, of one thing, there’s no denying,
It is quite large.
In a contrary tale, somewhat taller
The world, I’m told, is getting smaller.
Yes, I’m sceptical, but that ain’t it:
I just wouldn’t want to have to paint it;
It is quite large.
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© 2011 J Cosmo Newbery
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There is no doubt, it is quite large
And no-one seems to be in charge
Of this condensed cosmic place,
Hurtling through the depths of space.
They cannot even tell it’s shape,
Donut, disc or endless tape,
And that’s not for want of trying
But, of one thing, there’s no denying,
It is quite large.
In a contrary tale, somewhat taller
The world, I’m told, is getting smaller.
Yes, I’m sceptical, but that ain’t it:
I just wouldn’t want to have to paint it;
It is quite large.
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© 2011 J Cosmo Newbery
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Clever marriage of the two prompts. An enjoyable read!
ReplyDeleteVery clever collision of the two topics dear J Cosmo and a really great image you have chosen!
ReplyDeletexoxoxo ♡
Well you the comparison down pat, that sure is a lot of paint!
ReplyDeleteThese poems had a really good beat to them.
A largely nice job. :)
ReplyDeleteThis was a pleasure to read! especially aloud :o)
ReplyDeleteIs it not being contained within the navel of a cosmic elephant?
ReplyDeleteFunny, and well constructed. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteAnything which morphs delights me! Google 'Morph+Tony Hart' and you will understand why...ONly last week, I was given a small pack of plasticine with instructions for creating my own Morph -TRUE! I promise. May have to blog evidence soon...
ReplyDeleteI will bring my paintbrush and help, should you decide to start painting the world. Loved the ideas in your poem, btw..
Clever, witty, and a very good read.
ReplyDeleteReally clever and LOTS of fun!
ReplyDeleteThanks.
Meryl
http://www.departingthetext.blogspot.com
love the rhymes, well penned.
ReplyDeleteThoughtful piece, and so timely.
ReplyDeleteClever!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful marriage of little and large, and you are so right, nobody is in charge!
ReplyDeleteMost enjoyable!
ReplyDeletei thought folks were already painting the world red though ..
ReplyDeletemuch havoc is being created all over.
why not:)
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