Monday, October 03, 2011

CCLVI - Finely hewn fragment

This was written as part of something else
But that something never progressed.
Might as well put it up here until I need it.

The pride of his manhood, finely hewn,
Was enough to make a young girl swoon:
He was hung like a bull,
And their gravitational pull
Disturbed the path of the moon,
The moon,
Disturbed the path of the moon.


© 2011 J Cosmo Newbery
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  1. If this is part of something, you must have a lot more in your arsenal then. I supposed a programmed release is in the offing!


  2. Oh - how I flung back my head and laughed! Thank you.

  3. Laughing out loud! Thanks for a wonderful start to the day :)

  4. Hah! Love it. Poor Lewis Carroll would have a tough time topping this ditty.

  5. kaykuala: It was vague idea about the David & Goliath story, from Goliath side. No other releases pending.


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