Sunday Whirl (Wordle #100) presents a list of words
that we must incorporate in a writing piece.
The words this week are:
master, street, change, share, train, die, calls, stretch, march, words, places, create, faint
The Street To Nowhere.
The street was dark and lightly wet,
The wind had quite a bite.
The walkers kept their collars up
And pulled their jackets tight,
The whistle of a distant train
Rolled glumly through the night.
Puddles of light spill out from shops,
As places to find heat.
And there they create little flocks,
To stand and sadly bleat;
Unable to change the weather,
Afraid to cross the street.
Some fail to master how to walk,
Some march as on parade,
Some stretch their legs and make a dash,
Others wait in the arcade.
Calls, words unclear, echo down the street
To die away and fade.
A couple share a bag of chips,
Against the chilly blast.
I watch with remote bemusement,
As from another caste.
A faint smell of vinegar lingers
Long after they have passed.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2013
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A wonderful, visual poem incorporating the list of words dear J Cosmo.
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you spin so well you words, creating (and bringing to life) such an amazing scene.
ReplyDeleteI was on that street to nowhere...from your first line to your last. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you. You conjured up a scene I know well, and painted it so much better than I could.
ReplyDeleteA great metaphor about life too!
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