Three Word Wednesday asks us to write a piece using three nominated words.
This week they are 'Miserable', 'Brisk' and 'Detached'.
My first haiku.
Please note that this is an exercise to use the three words.
It is NOT a psychological assessment!
Please note that this is an exercise to use the three words.
It is NOT a psychological assessment!
Remote and detached,
Feeling quite miserable.
A brisk walk needed.
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© 2012 J Cosmo Newbery
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Fine haiku; well done.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct and to the point. What made you think of a haiku this time?
ReplyDeleteDon't really know - the last line left out at me and, being 5 syllables, brought a Haiku to mind.
DeleteFor 'left' read 'leapt'.
DeleteI wouldn't know as far as Haiku goes, but I hope you get out of the detachment and misery soon! : ) x
ReplyDeleteyes sometimes fast feet are the only way to shift a stuck head..jae
ReplyDeleteA brisk walk really helps at times !!!
ReplyDeletenicely done
ReplyDeleteOK, so give us a psychological assessment!
ReplyDeleteMe too!It's OK, no need to be so defensive about being such a sensitive little flar:)
ReplyDeleteIt's true enough in general but people seemed to be thinking it was how I felt as I wrote it. Not so.
DeleteCos, lovely haiku. How do you "do" 3WW this way? I'm in awe. "I am not woooooorthy!!!" wink. Amy
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