Saturday, December 20, 2025

1860 - Stripping Away Innocence

 

 Image: ChatGPT but with a little human intervention

The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
hook sway hearts strip chain dizzy sweep you stick swell steam shock



Stripping Away Innocence

They are friends, right?
You go out with your friends, right?
Well, not my best decision.

I was expecting a stage show
(The place was called “The Hook”)
And, certainly, it did have a stage—
But free entry struck me as unusual.
Chains and poles were curious, too,
But modern staging can be a bit edgy.

The music began to swell,
The audience, all male I noticed,
Was clapping and swaying to the music.
You, and I mean me here, were swept along
Heavy thumping base—a clapped heart-beat.
Hypnotic, rhythmic, expectant…

I was a bit shocked when a lady appeared
And wrapped herself around a pole,
Moving like an oiled anaconda.  
You could tell she was a lady
As, anatomically, little was covered
By anything other than the pole.
But “Lady” implies a class I’m not sure applies.
Let’s say female —even that, I’m told, is fluid.

Eventually I left that testosterone filled steam room
Eventually.  
I was there with my friends, right?
Friends stick it out to the end, right?


Wednesday, December 10, 2025

1859 - Stop the Presses!

 

 Image: ChatGPT but with a little human intervention

The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
rinse days still thicket bomb fake criminal imagine foster lies sky sink



Stop The Presses!

Fear.
Anger.
Rinse.
Repeat.

The urgent thicket of breathless lies
Bomb threats! Bomb threats! – all supposed.
Criminal gangs, they’re black, case is closed
Questions are asked but no answers posed
Sources are quoted but not disclosed
Nothing they say is ever opposed
All seemingly pulled from cloudless skies.

Fear.
Anger.
Rinse.
Repeat.

No time is given to digest it
No chance to see it is empty swill,
No chance to process and distill
No time to reflect while sitting still
They urge you to take the offered pill
Fake news gives the greatest thrill—
They’ll destroy you if you contest it.

Fear.
Anger.
Rinse.
Repeat.

The cycles of the daily news
Spins around, ever and ever faster
But power and money are its master
They pretend to be a fair broadcaster
But dance the tune of their paymaster
Use a young and well-dressed newscaster
But replace the facts with slanted views

Fear.
Anger.
Rinse.
Repeat.

It’s hard to imagine they could sink down
To levels below where they currently sit.
But the moguls don’t care one little bit
If they fill the arena with mindless shit
Or foster hatred where no facts fit
It’s all too lucrative for them to quit
Ethics will never turn them around.

Fear.
Anger.
Rinse.
Repeat.



Thursday, December 04, 2025

1858 - The Surfacing

 

Image by ChatGPT with human post-editing.

Curiously two prompt sites had Kraken themes:
Poets and Storytellers and dVerse Poets


The Surfacing
(Subtitle: The Kraken wakes)

Fear.
Dread.
Anxiety.
The emotional ambush
By monsters—
Long stored,
Deep harboured.
An awakening
That pulls you under,
Attempts to drown you
In a sea
Of thoughts,
Of imaginations,
Of reimagined past.
Sharpened,
Brighter,
Repolished,
Relived again,
In the fresh waters
Of now.
But here is the catch:
The monster is not the problem.
It is the ship that matters—
A good ship—strong hulled, well crewed—
Will passage safely.