Showing posts with label Cinquain. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Cinquain. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 03, 2013

605 : The Loss (revisited)


Back in March, dVerse Poets challenged us to write a 'cinquain', 
a five line poem with 2, 4, 6, 8, and 2 syllables in the five lines.

My original version caused one of my readers of the time to complain
and I removed the poem.  I regret doing that now and have recreated it
but built around what was probably the hardest phone-call
I ever took as a Life-Line counsellor. 

A man had found a book when tidying his garage.  
It had belonged to his son who had drowned a few years earlier 
and brought his grief back in full force.

The Loss

The book
Was in a box
When he found it one day; 
He held it tightly to his chest 
And cried.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2013 
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Friday, March 15, 2013

CDLXXX - The Parting


dVerse challenges us to write a 'cinquain', a five line poem with
2, 4, 6, 8, and 2 syllables in the five lines.  

None of the examples rhymed but no-one said that they couldn't.


The Parting

Today
I’ll go away,
Shield myself from dismay.
It seems a better choice than stay.
Okay?

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© J Cosmo Newbery 2013
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