Thursday, July 17, 2025

1389 - A Separate Peace

 

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The Sunday Whirl presents these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

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Poets & Storyteller's prompt is "Survive out of spite".  I merged the two.




A Separate Peace


Care about what others think

and you will always be their prisoner.

- Lao Tzu


Pity.

I pity you.

The fire you carry

Can only consume you.

It shows in your face,

In your fists, in your eyes.

All of it wasted on me.


My goal,

My mission,

Is to laugh at you,

To laugh openly

At the emotions

That are constantly

Brewing, 

Infusing your life,

With an acidic phlegm—

Corroding the vessel

That contains them.


It is not my role 

To reflect them back at you, 

Neither magnified, nor reduced, 

Just ignored.

That is the greatest revenge,

To make and hold a space

Where I am constant and true

To my own values,

To walk my own path.

To not to give you a piece of my mind,

But to create a peace within my mind,

A separate peace.



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1 comment:

  1. To put people's minds at rest, I had no-one specifically in mind when writing this. It was just a writing exercise.

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