Thursday, August 07, 2025

1393 - The Path

 

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The Sunday Whirl presents these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

souvenirs free touch know cracks siren window waves sting show ring give


Poet & Storytellers had the following prompt: 

"What’s the most important step a person can take?"

My answer is 'forward'.



The Path


"The past is not a tether but a teacher. 

When the lesson is learned, step forward."

— Unknown, possibly inspired by Rumi.


They are everywhere.

Windows on a past life.

Souvenirs fill my space.

Not all mine.  Not all ours.

That’s the sting, of course,

I have become the curator

Of someone else’s loves.

But they do touch me—

I know why they were special,

Mostly.

Special to someone else.

Rings, of course, stay,

Their story is eternal.

But where to from here?



The past.  The future.

The linkages crack,

The grip loosens—

The sirens of life, a living life,

Call me, pull me,

Set me free,

Leading me on—

To the future.



Behind me,

The past waves,

Blows me a loving kiss,

And wishes me well.

I step forward.



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1 comment:

  1. I love your poem and yes, see similarities to mine but totaly unique.

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