Monday, October 13, 2025

1850 - The Concourse

 

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The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

sparrows bell migrate emerge flutter still stretch slinking memories branches fidgeting crash



The Concourse


“All journeys have secret destinations 

of which the traveler is unaware.”

— Martin Buber


There is a sparrow on the concourse.

What can it be thinking?

This is an airport, perhaps it feels it belongs.

People sit near me,

Focussed on the fluttering sign, the flipping letters—

DEPARTED . DELAYED . LANDED

I wonder idly if one crashes, is it just ‘delayed’?

Some fidget, most just scroll.

Some stretch out—relaxed, or bored, or tense.

The honks of passing electric trolleys, 

More indifferent than urgent—

Going past with their own agendas.

People pass by me.  

Around me.  I’m invisible.  Observing.

Some stride, full of intention.

Some, travel-weary, trudge.

Are they migrating?  Perhaps.

Or returning home.

Others emerge from the opening doors,

Doors we are forbidden to enter,

Searching for familiar faces—

A blank look struggling for recognition

Where what were only memories 

Coalesce into laughter and hugs,

Branches returning to the tree.

Others slink out, downcast—

Seeing no-one, expecting no-one.

I watch the fluttering letters search for a word—

“LANDED”.  I give a long exhale.


Soon...



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