Thursday, November 20, 2025

1856 - The Watcher

 

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The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
greed tragedy despair presence walk calm strings earth all spirit vibrating heart 

Poets and Storytellers gave the following prompt: 
We will invite you to find inspiration in this quote: 
“The most expensive garment you’ll ever own is your own flesh.”


The Watcher

I am watching you—
Watching you as you walk
Upon the soil, upon the land,
Upon my earth, whose spirit
Once gave birth to you.

Your presence is my gift
Of life to the Universe.
You arose from my waters,
But never grasped your inheritance.
Now my heart despairs 
For what your future holds.

Your future, my children,
Hangs by a thread, precariously.
A thread thinned by the tragedies
Of war and greed, frayed 
By senseless intolerance,
Vibrating discordantly
Due to the disharmony
That mars the calm lands
That you were given.

I do not threaten you.
I can pull no strings,
Create no changes.
I am just watching you.
Waiting.


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19 comments:

  1. A poignant reminder of our responsibilities to the planet and each other 🙌

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  2. Deborah PedersenNovember 20, 2025

    I can pull no strings. Vibrating discordantly. Such good lines. Thank you for your work toward the beauty of this world.

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  3. I fully can agree with this... such a dark reminder of what we are doing to ourselves and what we have been given.

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  4. Gasp! One can’t argue with these lines:
    ‘You arose from my waters,
    But never grasped your inheritance.
    Now my heart despairs
    For what your future holds.’

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  5. "You arose from my waters/But never grasped your inheritance" .. this is so powerful! A stark reminder of what we owe to ourselves and the earth.

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  6. wow haunting yet tender, the watcher eternalises our presence in earth’s memory.”

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  7. A powerful piece! (Sad to think there may not be very long left to wait.)

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  8. It's hard not to despair at all the people throwing their inheirtance away. But the ones that reach for it with both hands give me hope.

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  9. Very on target, JC. The Lord gave us the job of being the custodian of our good earth. We are doing a p.p . job of that.

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  10. so relevant to present times...with all that is going around!!

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  11. "Your future, my children,
    Hangs by a thread, precariously." In this galactic lottery, we got the chance to be born, live and contribute - both as a species and as individual. And we are being reckless thinking it will last for ever...

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  12. The Watcher would have written the most poems out of anyone.

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  13. Oh my goodness, the pull of generational tides is so strong here. Kudos for capturing that absolutely real and yet fleeting perspective.

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  14. The previous comment about generational tides is from me - sorry I was anonymous! I said, "Oh my goodness, the pull of generational tides is so strong here. Kudos for capturing that absolutely real and yet fleeting perspective."

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  15. http://jaerose-jaerose.blogspot.co.ukNovember 24, 2025

    A very powerful ending which enhances the message of your poem - Jae

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  16. We are the mute witness of degeneration

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  17. Reading your poem, really taking time to absorb every thought, word ~~ left me wondering ~~ do we have the right to hope?

    Your poem is beyond captivating, left me wondering what are we doing ... what have we done. A beautiful write indeed.




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