Thursday, January 29, 2026

1865 - Luxurious

 

 Image: ChatGPT but with a little human intervention

The Sunday Whirl presented these eleven words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
wonderland bound morning ice knees hope cross wheel three cape head 

Poets and Storytellers had the prompt "Luxurious" - I merged the two.



Luxurious
Go with the feeling.

What is luxurious?
It’s a slippery sort of notion.
It is not built on hope
But on quality, on the feeling,
On things bound to please,
But more than "just enough".
It is a step beyond the normal.
But it is also a frame of mind,
Things are luxurious if you think them so.
Luxury wears a warm, fleecy cape
On a chilly winter morning.
It can be as simple as the pleasure
Of ice in your end of day drink.
It can be looking at a winter wonderland—
From the log fire side of the window.
It can be laying your head
On a freshly washed pillowcase
That someone else has ironed.
It can be having three morning coffees
Where one is normal and two is indulgent.
When your knees ache from a cross-country hike,
Luxury is that long soak in a hot bath.
But this is where it gets awkward:
If these things are your normal life,
If the wheel of fortune smiled on you
And you live a life of ease,
Then they may not register as a luxury.
Do the ultra-rich experience luxury
If there is no step higher for them?
I this regard, I claim the luxury
Of ignorance.

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13 comments:

  1. At least Chatto got the right number of toes.

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  2. I agree with all your definitions (being far from ultra-rich) – and I love both your questions and resolution in last verse.

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  3. Oh a delicious definition of luxurious Love the last stanza

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  4. Good question: do the wealthy and privileged become immune/blind to the luxury that surrounds them?

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    1. There's always a bigger jet! I don't envy them really.

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  5. Very human and homely write. Nicely done 👏

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  6. I love your definitions of luxury. That last stanza is thought-provoking,
    but I'll never have to worry about sorting it all out.

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  7. I like the way of describing luxury. "All depends."

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  8. I endorse your definition of luxury and I too wish to know how the ultra rich feel what is luxury - must be different from ours.

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  9. The ultra rich are so utterly vacuous and boring with a desperate need for new sensations to enable them to feel stimulated.Spending any time with them makes creative poverty appealing.

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  10. luxury feels different to different people...

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  11. Oh this I agree too well, you have pointed out what luxury is in all essence

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  12. luxury is the little things in life, but only if we could realise that while we still have them.

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