Friday, June 05, 2026

1893 - Surprised by Life

 

The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece. 
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Poet’s & Storytellers: “We shall invite to write about a time you surprised yourself.”.



Surprised by Life

I
Now, in my waning years
I look at the photo, softly,
Look at the happy shadow,
Look at a ghost of myself.

II
He looks so happy,
Sitting on the steps.
Oblivious to all that lies
Ahead of him.
He can’t know, of course,
What surprises,
What different paths
Will present themselves,
Kindle his interest,
Spin stories of ‘maybe’
To invite him in.

III
He will take risks,
Get into trouble,
Dig himself out again,
Sometimes alone,
Often times not.
He will experience
The warmth of love
And the chill of loss.
But sitting there, happy
It is all opaque to him.
Until it happens.
It is one of life’s blessings
That it unfolds slowly.


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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 05, 2026

    A very gentle poem addressing a life lived. I was talen by the ‘looking at a happy shadow’. Deftly handled verses. Thank you.

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  2. AnonymousJune 05, 2026

    Lovely reflective piece

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  3. What a wonderful photo - you looked so full of life and wonder - I am glad you still have words that hopefully do something similar - Jae

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  4. Beautiful the blissful ignorance of a child and what a cute photo

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  5. Oh gosh yes, I think we can all relate and agree ... now that you have put it into words for us so well.

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  6. This poem is so relatable – and the phrase ‘a ghost of myself’ is just how I feel when looking at old photos. Oh for the innocence of childhood!

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