Thursday, October 01, 2026

1926 - To Oblivion, I give a Toast

 

The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.

wallow tag find music swelling bell delirium spell pales knowing just senses

(Oops, the prompt word was swallow, I lost the s somewhere.  Not about to change anything now.)

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To Oblivion, I Give a Toast.*


I love general anaesthetics!

You may find that odd,

Put it down to pre-op delirium,

But I am comfortable with that.

Just by knowing that I will shortly

Have one of the best sleeps

I will ever experience 

Thrills me,

Swelling my chest with anticipation.

True, there is the awkward issue

Of the reason for being there

But it pales beside a good sleep.


Wheeled in, tags on both wrists, to be safe,

Gentle music to soothe the senses,

A brief spell while they get ready,

But no time to wallow in the situation.

“Count backwards from one hundred”.

“One hundred.  Ninety…”

Nothing.

Then a bright room, with bells and beeps,

With attentive nurses asking “Can you hear me?”

Delivering tea, weaker than I ever was.

And an egg and lettuce sandwich.


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*Well, an egg and lettuce sandwich, if the truth be known.


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12 comments:

  1. “I laid me down and slept; I awaked; for the LORD sustained me.” — Psalm 3:5 (KJV)

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  2. You could just go to 7-11 and buy an egg and lettuce sandwich.

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  3. Ah sigh. Ground hog day in the timeless building they claim is there for our health. Life will wait outside for you.

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  4. Beautifully expressed-for a little sleep. Some people just sleep like a log, normally

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  5. Well, the photo proves it's true! I love this gently amusing account of your experience.

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  6. I'm glad you are able to tuck into your sandwich and tea - Jae

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  7. I enjoyed this colorful slip into oblivion before surgery!

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  8. This made me laugh. Only you could make anaesthesia sound like something to look forward to! The simple ending with the tea and sandwich was delightful.

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  9. Wow. Viewing anesthesia as a peaceful sleep is next level cognitive reframing 🤣

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  10. i found this amusing, and something i would never think about.

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  11. Damn! I haven't had an egg and lettuce sandwich in a loooooong time! Last general anaesthetic I had was about 13 years ago and I too, enjoy the experience! Nicely done Cosmo 👏

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