Photo from Nepal by Samantha Chin.
You Never Know
You never know the prints you leave
Or even if the snows will grieve
When time and times erase
Your clear but superficial trace.
When we can no longer perceive
That certain presence you would weave
Only then will we believe
But hope still lives in that empty space—
You never know.
We harbor the hope that we can retrieve
That sense of life, that joie de vivre.
An enticing thought we can’t erase
And draw comfort from its warm embrace;
Maybe simple, maybe naïve.
You never know.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2015
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Question is: should we know?
ReplyDeleteWe almost always leave a trace of ourselves or an impression wherever we travel and with the people we meet.
ReplyDeleteLovely words dear Cosmo.
xoxoxo ♡
Welcome back. With a profound question too.
ReplyDeleteMyself, I hope to disappear.
Hope alone of all the gifts remained in the jar after Pandora opened it. That is what sustains so many of us to this day.
ReplyDeleteLoved this emotive piece.. asking us all a timeless question.. :D
ReplyDeleteAn enticing thought we can’t erase
And draw comfort from its warm embrace;
Maybe simple, maybe naive.
You never know.
Profound!
xoxo
We all leave our print..however simple or naive...or in a certain little lady's case sticky little hand prints..we may not have changed the world but for a microscopic moment of time we were in it..(and very good to see you back)..
ReplyDeleteDo I hope so? or not? I'm quite happy not to know. But I can attest to the traces still with me of everyone who passed this way. Beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately true...we will not know the prints we leave. They will only be seen after we leave this earth.
ReplyDeleteFabulous and starting with those opening words you weave a perfectly penned poem.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure what prints I want to leave, but can we really choose? Maybe we can just try to wear our moccasins.. And write our words as poets
ReplyDelete"An enticing thought we can’t erase / And draw comfort from its warm embrace;"...soothing lines...
ReplyDeleteSomehow, this strongly reminds me of the movie 'Interstellar'. Beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteI resonate with these thoughts.....at least we leave our poems, in hopes something of us will linger on......nice to see you, Cosmo!
ReplyDeleteYou never know right? all we can do is go out and live life to find out. or we can learn from older generations like our parents and their siblings and parents and so on. thanks for the thought.
ReplyDeletethe unfathomable mystery that life is encourages us to humility and service, there in lies contentment
ReplyDeletehave a nice Sunday
much love...
Poignant in the light of recent events in Nepal.
ReplyDeleteWell, we don't know. But we do know the little prints we can leave that matter to us and others
ReplyDeletenow. Thought provoking poem. Enjoyed.
Poignant words.....great to see you back again :-)
ReplyDeleteOne can never know but one must anticipate. Anticipation is the first step towards preparedness!
ReplyDeleteHank
I am a bit like Björn, I am not sure what I'd like to leave. And is what I want even what should be left behind. Though-provoking and beautiful pom on legacy!
ReplyDelete'You never know the prints you leave' ~ I pretty sure we leave our 'prints'...which ones? - the ones we expressing by communicating our truth if we will....if not - we still influence the others on energetic level. ~ Glad you're back, Cosmo!
ReplyDeleteIf nothing else, the Himalayas remind us that the Earth will move beneath us, despite our best efforts at inhabiting the territory or turning it into our playground. A harsh lesson, it is true.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteI was thinking about you last night, Cosmo...hoping you'd make a re-appearance soon; a comeback as it were! And now this morning I see you've been back for a week!! Sorry I missed your return.
ReplyDeleteI was off the air for three days last week...unable to be connected to the Internet...and I'm still catching up with everything that went on during the time I was missing in action!
I love your poem, Cosmo...welcome back. :)