Saturday, October 05, 2024

1329 - Glimpses of a Dream

 



The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

This weeks words are: 

wet, jump, secret, dream, bed, breath, secrets, lashes, fire, plague, glimpses, lies



Glimpses of a Dream

There’s a green-eyed fellow idle, to the north of Kathmandu.
There’s a bus of eager punters, heading west.
There’s Ash Wednesday and the bushfire hullabaloo,
There’s the pulsing bilge pump at poor Gael’s breast.

There’s the random plague that completely shut the city
And closed the rest of the world as well.
There’s the ancient escritoire, full of all that’s pretty.
There’s the dinner call, with the old school bell.

There’s the ominous arrival of the mechanical bed  
There’s the lovely baby stilton sent out through the mail.
There’s the son that jumped out of a tiny plane
But only once he had done it, went on to tell the tale.

There’s the blushing yellow Peace rose, flowering in the garden
A living yearly memory of her dear departed mother.
There’s her ironclad determination, not to let harden
Any part of our ongoing love for one another.

There’s the intimate moment on a warm and secret beach,
There’s the shark plane doubling back.
There’s the son who drank all the medicines in reach,
There’s the spurtle, poised for quick attack.

There’s Primrose, later known as Prim, the most elegant of cats.
There’s the picnic in the park, to see the Bard’s Macbeth.
There’s the pipe that burst in the ceiling of the Dundee flat
There’s the pathos of that last exhaling breath.

There’s the castle on the Overland, where lashes were the norm.
There’s the weekly formal dinner, with cuddles, by the fire.
There’s the table set so beautifully, with decorations of some form,
There’s ball of belly-button fluff, stolen from the dryer.

There are the wet eyes of the one who silently recalls and weeps.
There’s the marching for The Voice, with the home-made sign.
There’s the The Prince of Puddings, a haggis, on a bed of neeps.
There’s the New Year’s fireworks and playing of Auld Lang Syne.

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10 comments:

  1. From calm to chaotic to heartbreaking…
    The poem feels like a kaleidoscope of life - it captures life in all its variety and unpredictability. The mix of everyday moments and significant events feels deeply personal yet universal. Devastation and joy, moments of intimacy and danger, sadness and warmth, nostalgia and love are mixed together reflecting the unpredictable flow of life. Reading brought both a smile and tears. Enjoyed reading it, thank you!

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  2. Wonderful poem, with good slice of Surrealism in it.

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  3. That is one chaotic dream, everything in it!

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  4. I like the way that, in the midst of all the richness and chaos of living, the poem keeps returning to the central, loving relationship and the attendant sorrow – but without belabouring the emotion. (Btw, for me it 's not 'that last exhaling breath' which remains so appallingly final in memory, but the sudden, strange silence when the next breath didn't happen.)

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  5. This is a wonderful portrait of life in all its failings and successes.
    I really enjoyed reading it.

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  6. Wonderful This reads like the roller coaster of life

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  7. What a heady dream! The full spectrum of life is encapsulated in this piece and those words. :)

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  8. You have captured moments well-lived.

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