The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.
This weeks words are:
scratches, screeches, soothes, fringe, image, sighs, locks, shiny, rises, swarm, ghoulish, night
I ignored all of them.
Poets & Storytellers invited us to write about the moon
I ignored that too.
What a Wonderful(ly Cynical) World.
With apologies to Louis Armstrong.
I see trees of green, red roses too
But trees can also be red and silver and gold
In Texas the roses are yellow, or so I’m told.
I see them bloom for me and you
Well, technically they bloom to attract pollenators
Birds, bees, and insects. Curiously not alligators.
And I think to myself
A point of order, if it’s alright with you,
There’s no-one else that you can really think to.
What a wonderful world
The climate’s shot, the fascists are coming,
The cruelty in Gaza is simply mind-numbing.
I see skies of blue and clouds of white
But let’s not forget the sunsets of red
And the thundery clouds that rumble overhead.
The bright blessed days, the dark sacred nights
My days are lonely and extend beyond countin’,
Cue Mussorgsky’s Night on Bald Mountain.
And I think to myself
We’ve already been here, I don’t wish to moan
But your thoughts remain thoughts, encased in some bone.
What a wonderful world
The rich are getting richer, the poor left behind
The news is getting faker, the planet over-mined.
The colors of the rainbow
So pretty in the sky
Are also on the faces
Of people going by
Violet, Blue, Green, Yellow, Orange, and Red.
Not all thought to be healthy for the average passing head.
I see friends shaking hands, saying, "How do you do?"
“How do you do?” sounds posh, like the words of a car-yard con,
Best check your wrist, your watch may be gone.
They're really saying, "I love you"
Essential words for a husband to wife
But said to others can land you in strife.
I hear babies cry, I watch them grow
In fairness to the babies, before they get older
They laugh, they burble, and they throw up on your shoulder.
They'll learn much more
Than I'll ever know
A debatable point Louis, education is now largely dismissed,
If it’s not on TikTok, it doesn’t exist.
And I think to myself
What a wonderful world
Yes, I think to myself
What a wonderful world
As far as I can tell that’s just a load of hooey.
Keep your thoughts to yourself, if you don’t mind Louis.
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Good grief! Who put sand in your porridge?
ReplyDeleteI believe people somewhere in the US eat 'grits' but my porridge is the epitome of oat-y smoothness. Even my sandwiches are devoid of sand.
DeleteOK, not sand. Maybe a burr in your Y-fronts?
DeleteYou little prickle! How can you suggest such a thing?
DeleteIt's my job.
ReplyDeleteThis is a heady dose of half-empty tossed into the half-full glass of life when both parts are true depending on the view. :)
ReplyDeletePerhaps we need a different sized glass?
DeleteOh, wicked! (In both senses.) I thoroughly enjoyed your cynical ripostes to Louis ... but oh, if only they weren't so true!
ReplyDeleteStrange times, Rosemary.
DeleteI totally love this... it's nice to see hyper-positivity called out with a dose of reality....and good humour...bookmarking this to read many more times..!!!
ReplyDeleteI love it... I laughed at your cynism and you are right, there is a lot of things wrong in the world.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis cynic is grinning (while also appreciating the beauty that is left in the world). Thank you.
ReplyDeleteYou and your photography add to that remaining beauty.
DeleteI should point out that my original intention was to use the 12 words in the alternate version but it all became to contrived and I dropped that idea.
ReplyDeleteAnd I think to myself what a wonderful world.....Yes it is....without people. Yet without people there would be no chocolate ice cream or iced fruit cake and mince pies, so they are good for a few things
ReplyDeleteGranted.
DeletePerfect world? Resilience, compassion, and true love don’t blossom in a perfect world. They grow in the messy, complicated reality we live in, where beauty comes not in spite of imperfections, but because of them. Enjoyed reading. Thank you
ReplyDeleteI like that.
DeleteWell, you would. Considering your imperfections, you must be a real beauty! You may blush.
DeleteThe world certainly is not wonderful at the moment - but perhaps we can still write and dream that it will be - Jae
ReplyDeleteWe can but hope. I listen to this song every morning when showering (it's a long story) and slowly a rebuttal grew in my mind.
DeleteOne of my folks' favorite song. In retrospect, it seems we've lost that wonderful world. Fascists are coming and your words ring true.
ReplyDeleteLove how your wonderfully contrary mood was the impetus for this truly glorious poem! What a Wonderful World is one of my all time favorites along with his recording of "Smile."
ReplyDeleteLove what you've done here and the cynic in me agrees. I think you may be wrong re alligators though... :o]
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Gotta love the cynic in you. I happen to agree.
ReplyDeleteI want to laugh, but the reality of your lines only pull a slightly hysterical shrill out of me. The world is a real mess, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteWatching the US election from a distance is like waiting for the results of a biopsy and fearing the worst.
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