Thursday, July 24, 2025

1390 - No Promises

 

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The Sunday Whirl presents these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

churn secret battle names glimpse cradle skins dragons stir flash fringe illusion


Poets & Storyteller's prompt is "Celebration".  I merged the two.




No Promises


“Realize deeply that 

the present moment

is all you ever have.”

- Eckhart Tolle.


The stomach churns.

I don’t want to believe it.  

But I must.

The dragons of fear 

Cast long shadows.

Shadows that foretell

Nameless loss and pain.

Pain with names too.

Do I battle?  Fight it?

Can I fight it?

No secrets held here,

It is a waiting game.

A glimpse of hope

Not a flash, a flicker,

Stirs now and then.

Is it an illusion?

A soft cradle of hope?

A fringe technique

With a name too long

And no promises.

Is it a cure?

Or just a delay?

Is it too early to celebrate?

Only time will tell.

Time does tell—

Silence.


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5 comments:

  1. The name too long? Bevacizumab.
    (Said quickly three times while standing in a chalk pentangle and you will get sucked into the underworld.)

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  2. Awww, I think you might hope for a happier ending, given a little more time.

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  3. We are all more than ready, eager in fact, to celebrate but as you have aptly noted it is too early to tell what the results of our hopes will be.

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  4. This reminds me of the U.S. military cemetery on the beach area of Northern France, names and no names. Total of near 93,000 in 10 European U.S. cemeteries in World War 2.
    p.s. (May bore you) Update on my story today. "I still have the car and drive it. We are Texas, they have classified it as a Texas Antique Auto meaning at least 25 years old and I don't drive or use it for work or school. Low insurance rates and I only have to renew its license once every five years."

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