Thursday, October 16, 2025

1851 - The Circus


 Image by ChatGPT (and me!)


The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  

draped moment velvet reveal tips jazz touch back roar filmy strips forgotten

Same twelve words in both acts.



The Circus


Act I


Music: "Entry of the Gladiators" - Fucik


Anticipation!

The smells!  The sounds!

The murmur of the crowd.

The tent. Lights, ropes, a trapeze.

All eyes on the velvet-draped entrance.

The music starts, the crowd inhales—holds…

The moment is near.

The curtains pull back

To reveal the ringmaster, top-hat and cane,

The crowd erupts in a roar—

The world outside forgotten.

The grand parade begins:

Jugglers, clowns and acrobats,

Elephants and horses,

Fire-eaters and magicians,

Ladies in filmy outfits

And legs to their armpits

Parade around the ring

To the music.  Modern gladiators.

“Let the show begin!”

And begin it does. Act after act,

Cheer after cheer, entranced children.

And then, after the normal jazz and pizazz,

After a little more than a touch of showmanship,

The show is over.

The crowd leaves.

The lights go off.



Act II


Music: "Heureuse" - Edith Piaf


A moment to reflect.

Too many moments 

to lie and reflect.

No velvet here,

Just strips of filmy curtain.

Pull them back to reveal

A small, drab caravan.

Ornaments serve as a touch 

Of a home, largely forgotten.

Exhausted, 

she is draped on a narrow bed,

Her back aching,

Her hands still chalky,

The trapeze forgotten.

Too tired to wash.

The adrenaline—gone,

The roar of the crowd—gone.

A melancholy jazz tune plays

On a small battery radio.

Alone and tired,

She tips into sleep.



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4 comments:

  1. Ah you made the circus come alive wonderful and then the shadow of the aftermath when the curtain has dropped Very good

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  2. So vivid, these contrasting pictures. Both made me feel as if I was right there.

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  3. I think these are feelings many performers can relate to. The adrenaline high, then the crash.

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