Thursday, November 13, 2025

1855 - Pivot Point


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The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
rooted years footsteps creaks look stir hour loop clock echo before slips

dVersepoets has the prompt "Pivot".



Pivot Point


You have to leave something behind 

to move forward.

– Bikey Thapa


Thirty-nine years—

It is time to go.

The frame creaks,

The clocks chime slowly,

They know all too well

How relentlessly time slips by.


In a daze, I walk around—

The house is partially empty now,

Old memories loop around me.

My footsteps echo too.

Boxes are filled, stacked, waiting.

The longest hour, the hardest hour, 

Is the one just before leaving.


But one must look to the future,

Take chances—if not now, when?

To be rooted to one spot is comfortable,

But comfort is where dreams go to die.


I open the door 

and step out...



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13 comments:

  1. I love how you ended this. All that history, all those stories/memories of the past--now to the stepping out into a new adventure.

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  2. I've always loved moving house. It made things fresh again.

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  3. The longest hour, the hardest hour,
    Is the one just before leaving.

    So true, and where would we ever be if we never dared?

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  4. A perfect response to the prompt and reflective of my attitute, as well. I've loved every place I've left. Loved the new place even more...

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  5. Bravo fir stepping out
    Happy you dropped by my blog

    Much♡love

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  6. Good on you and well expressed I love "But comfort is where dreams go to die." A nice piece of wisdom.

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  7. It takes both courage and hope, I think.

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  8. A pivotal moment, choosing to take a risk, have faith, and let go of our desire for certainty.

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  9. Beautifully expressed ...

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  10. So well done! I love:

    "To be rooted to one spot is comfortable,

    But comfort is where dreams go to die."

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  11. A very moving poem expressing the gravity of this courageous move. The brevity of the work adds to the impact. I wish you luck and future happiness.

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  12. Comfort kills dreams...how true. As I read your lines I wonder whether I have the strength to step out...

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  13. Deborah PedersenNovember 17, 2025

    Comfort being where dreams go to die, seems to be a most popular line. I also add my vote for it. I also love the memories looping around - brings to mind a cat looping one's ankles. Well done. Another fine poem.

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