Thursday, January 22, 2026

1863 - The Enigma


  Image: ChatGPT but with a little human intervention


The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
robes exposed bind beads fabric form harmony chaos cave enigma dwells well

Poets and Storytellers has the prompt "the time of day you like best and why."
Well, time to sit and think, so anytime really.

What's Going On had the prompt "Peace"
Everything sort of overlapped.


The Enigma

“Silence is a source of great strength.” 
— Lao Tzu

No beads,
No robes of fine fabric
Or flimsy cloth.
No long hair or matted beard.
Dwelling in neither a cave 
Nor mountain cabin,
He sits on a park bench.
Alone.  Ignored.

Around him, chaos,
People hurry past
Impatiently, urgently.
The world is in turmoil,
Few recognise it as it is—
A house of cards,
A shared delusion
That binds us,
Draws us inwards
And downwards.
All is not well 
With this world.

But—there he sits.  
Still. Alone. Ignored.
Focussed inwards.
Finding harmony and peace
When around him there is none.
A lone sparrow stops
And watches him.


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12 comments:

  1. Ah, not so much a time as an attitude!

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  2. Love the contrast of the chaos and man focussing inwards and love 'a lone sparrow stops and watches him.

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  3. I imagine many of us are a part of and yet apart from the chaos.

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  4. I'm seeing a buddhist monk in my mind's eye.

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  5. The lone sparrow is a perfect touch.

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  6. I've always thought it was admirable, if imprudent, to be able to meditate on a busy street.

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  7. A kind of peace. Credit "What's Going On?"?

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  8. Ignored? No this is not about you then....Never :)

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  9. COSMO! So lovely to see you! Yay! I love the image of that lone sparrow watching him. And like the idea of his peacefulness in the midst of all the chaos. We have to work extra hard on that these days. So nice to read you today, kiddo.

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  10. Squirrels have fun properties we would all enjoy.

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  11. This poem has created such a vivid imagery. One who can focus inwards and finds harmony and peace wouldn't care less for being ignored!

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  12. Sometimes focusing inward is a good way to find that peace!

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