Sunday, August 26, 2012

CCCLXVII - Peeved

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Mad Kane has a regular limerick challenge.
She provides the first line, the rest is up to us.


A fellow was peeved at his mate
When she said that he wasn’t so great.
While the harsh truth annoyed,
It was the method employed:
He found out in a Facebook update.

A woman was peeved at her mate
Who thought that foreplay negates
The masculine control
Of the ultimate goal,
And went at it like a bull at a gate.

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© 2012   J Cosmo Newbery
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8 comments:

  1. I specially liked the 2nd stanza ... humorous :-)

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  2. Great limericks, saw em first on Mad Kane

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  3. Exercising my poetic license...once again I can't help myself! Please forgive me! Pretty pleeeeeeze!

    "The trouble was neither his method nor his gait

    That caused her to so fervently berate

    Her Facebook words he had misread

    It was when he left her bed with words unsaid

    That his actions upon her ego did grate"

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  4. I love reading your witty words, and I have shared with my Facebook friends!!!

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  5. Ha..ha...That first one is really good ~ And oh my on the second one ~ Smiles ~

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  6. LOL! Thanks for your fun contributions to my Limerick-Offs!

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  7. Too funny! Especially that first one.

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