Friday, January 08, 2016

842 - Set Adrift

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai has the prompt ‘dawn’.
I took the less obvious meaning.

Set Adrift

You think you have left
But you have been set adrift.
Reality dawns.
© J Cosmo Newbery 2016
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  1. Nice ... a very cleverly written senryu which I ejoyed very much. Bastet


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