Saturday, May 06, 2017

1017 - Paradise Island


Mad Kane poses a regular limerick challenge.
The key word this week is ‘made’.


Paradise Island

A ship-wrecked couple who displayed
Reluctance when contact was made,
Explained their position
Facilitated coition
So not really marooned, just mis-laid.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2017
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21 comments:

  1. I suspect they would dispute the miss part of the final line...
    You excel at limericks. Which are not easy.

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  2. AnonymousMay 07, 2017

    To lover this vow I once made
    Devotion to her I'll not fade
    For under her spell
    Life’s meaning now fell
    At least till motel bill was paid

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  3. ...but not completely browned off over all that time.

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  4. De, this is a gift of cackles. Thank you. Bwahahaha!

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    1. And I've no idea why I just called you "De". Pretend it says "J" *cough*.

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  5. One of those limericks I wish I had written. Well done!

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  6. Literal LOL. Nice execution of a classic dirty limerick.

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  7. Ha.. yes I guess there are those who would love a moment marooned.

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  8. ☁😊☁☁😊☁😁☁enjoyed your Limerick
    Thanks for dropping by my Sunday Standard today

    Much love...


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  9. Hahaha Thanks for making me burst out giggling. :)I'm indebted.
    ZQ

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  10. haha - oh and that picture is priceless as is the limerick. Still laughing :)

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  11. What a clever limerick. It brought a smile - and then - a chuckle. You are so good at this form.

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  12. AnonymousMay 08, 2017

    Thanks for the laughter,

    Elizabeth

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  13. The two of a kind
    Together they bind
    Undisturbed
    Unperturbed
    Alone that's fine

    Hank

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